(英语)英语书面表达提高训练及解析(1)(6)

want to be……，studying hard is……，we need……，That's……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我想要成为一个发明家；接下来介绍为了成为一个发明家，应该如何做；最后指出为了成为一个发明家，我要坚持做下去。此处play an important role in, come true, give up, such as等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

12．（·广西中考模拟）近几年来，一些学校开设了一些兴趣班（interest classes）或特色课（special classes）, 诸如烹饪课、手工制作课以及传统戏曲课等。你校校园网就你们学校开设此类课程的必要性广泛征求同学们的意见。以下是你们班同学的观点和理由。请就此并结合你自己的想法用英语写一篇短文，发表在校园网的英语论坛上。

提示语：develop one’s interests; get more knowledge; improve one’s life skills; a waste

of time; cause a lot of stress

要求：1. 短文应包括表格中的信息，并适当发挥；

2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；

3. 词数80左右。开头已给出，但不计入总词数。

Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.

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Thank you!【答案】Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.

Is it necessary to offer these classes? We had a discussion in our class. Some students think it’s really necessary to do it. First, it’s good for students t o develop their interests. And interests can make them get more knowledge. Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. These skills are useful for young students.

However, others have different opinions. They don’t think it’s so necessary. They think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study. And these activities can cause a lot of stress for children.

In my opinion, it’s a good idea to offer these classes. They are not only good for our study but

also for our growing.

Thank you!【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇话题作文，并且已给出了内容提示，所以我们在写作时要围绕所给内容提示展开。

根据作文要求，可以确定文章的时态是一般现在时; 在表达观点时通常会用到例如：I think, in one’s opinion 等引出观点的词语。另外，可以用到first, second, third, finally 等一一列出观点，使文章更有条理，次序。

【点睛】

这是一篇比较优秀的作文。首先内容完整，第一段摆出事实，第二段说明别人的的观点，最后说出自己的观点，在表达观点时有条理有次序。短文中使用了一些很好的词及短语，例如such as，and so on，However等使句子更有连贯性，及好的句型表达，例如：Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. They think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study等。

13．（·陕西中考模拟）下周一下午轮到你在英语课上做课堂报告, 你打算把你爸爸最近网购的音乐机器人（music robot）介绍给同学们。下图是关于这个音乐机器人的广告, 请你根据所提供的信息写一份发言稿。

我是能听会说的小音乐机器人,只要你对我说歌曲的名字, 我就能唱给你听。我还有其他本领……

参考词汇:small, clever, ask it about weather, problems in study, remind you of important dates, convenient

要求:1. 参考提示, 可适当发挥；

2. 语句涌顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整；

3. 文中不得出现个人真实信息；

Good morning, everyone! Here, I’d like to introduce the music robot my father bought online.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Good morning, everyone! Here, I'd like to introduce the music robot my father bought

online. It is small, so you can even carry it in your backpack. After you connect it to the Internet and speak to it, it can provide different kinds of services. For example, you just say, "Ding Dong, I want to listen to SHE's songs" ,and it will play their songs immediately. You can also ask it about weather or even your problems in study. Besides, it can remind you of important dates and so on.

I am so amazed at my music robot because it makes my life more enjoyable and convenient. I really love it!

【解析】

【分析】

这篇书面表达主要描述爸爸最近给“我”买的音乐机器人。

【详解】

这是篇材料作文。内容上首先要介绍这个音乐机器人，其次表达为什么“我”要介绍这个机器人，也就是对它的喜爱。在写作时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，这样才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。

14．（·辽宁初三）近年来“汉语热”在全球各地悄然兴起，你的笔友 Peter在如何学好汉语方面急需你的帮助，快来帮帮他吧！

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