(英语)英语书面表达提高训练及解析(1)(2)

3．（·四川中考模拟）近年来雾霾天气在中国许多城市频频发生。雾霾天气引起大家极大的关注。请你用英语写一篇有关雾霾的短文向校刊“英语角”投稿,内容包括：

1. 雾霾的危害

2. 雾霾产生的原因（2个）

3. 应对雾霾的措施（3个）

提示：雾霾 smog poisonous 有毒的

注意：1. 词数110左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。

In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.

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【答案】In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.

Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the ol d in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks.

How does it come about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air m ainly come as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on.

What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear completely.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们根据提示来介绍有关雾霾的情况，题目中给出了写作的内容，我们应将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意表达的层次和条理。其次要注意使用正确的时态和人称，通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，谓语动词用原形，特别要注意谓语动词形式要变化，这是一个写作的难点。最后要注意英语的表达习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型来表达，语法规范。还应使用一些较好的句型或者短语，增强文章的表现力。

4．（·全国中考模拟）假如你是Ivy，你们学校正在开展“爱心传递，从我做起”主题教育活动。请你根据所列提示问题谈谈你对这个活动的认识，用英语写一篇短文给某英文网站投稿。

提示问题：

（1） Why do you show your kindness to others? （At least one reason）

（2） What do you usually do when someone needs help? （At least two examples）

（3） How do you feel?

写作要求：

（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

（2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；

（3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

At my school, we are talking about what we can do to give hands to others in trouble.

【答案】At my school, we are talking about what we can do to give hands to others in trouble.

It is very important for us to show our kindness to others because everyone needs help when they get into trouble. Helping others is helping ourselves.

As a student, I usually send my books or money to the children in poor areas. When winter comes, I often offer some warm clothes to them. I always write to the children and know what they need. Then I try my best to meet their needs in their daily life. Now we have become close friends.

I feel very proud when they tell me they have made great progress at school. I will call on more people to help them.

【解析】这是一篇关于学校正在开展“爱心传递，从我做起”主题教育活动，谈谈自己的看法；

英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。

It’s+形容词+for sb to do sth做某事对某人来说是怎样的；make great progress 取得巨大进步

5．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

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