5. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
The summer holiday is coming. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad.
I hope I will have a good time there!
【答案】The summer holiday is coming. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I have read information about two countries——Britain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go to Britain.The time is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football matches.The first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting. However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconvenient. And it's expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 20000 yuan, But I still want to travel to England.
I hope I will have a good time there!
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文。中考后暑假即将开始，你和一些同学准备结伴出国旅行。旅行社提供了两个国家供你选择游玩。要求根据旅行社提供的信息将你的选择用英文向同学们介绍。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
8．（·江苏泰州中学附属初中中考模拟）请根据下表中的信息用英文介绍你的好友Lily。要求条理清楚，语句通顺，可做适当发挥。词数100字左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
I would like to tell you something about my close friend Lily.
【答案】My good friend
I would like to tell you something about my close friend Lily.
She has a round face and big, smiling eyes. She is a little shorter than I. She often wears a pair of small round glasses, so she looks very smart.
She is a polite and honest girl. I trust her because she never lies. She is my real friend. When I am sad, she always cares about me and listens to my problems carefully.
She also has a good sense of humor and is good at telling funny jokes. I seldom get bored with her. She also likes DIY. She once personally made her mother a music box for her birthday. This made his mother very happy.
She is willing to share things with others. She is always patient when helping others. She
said“ she would like to be a volunteer to help more people when she grows up.“
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如a little，a pair of，trust sb.，care about，listen to，a good sense of humor，be good at，get bored，be willing to，share with，would like to do，grow up等。而She often wears a pair of small round glasses, so she looks very smart./ When I am sad, she always cares about me and listens to my problems carefully./ She said she would like to be a volunteer to help more people when she grows up.等
复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
9．（·陕西西北工业大学附属中学中考模拟）当代雷锋郭明义，在《幸福就这么简单》一书中，用自己的点滴平凡小事诠释出幸福的真谛。幸福就围绕在我们身边，简单得触手可得，平凡得召之即来。那你的幸福观又是什么呢？请以 My Happiness 为题写一篇短文。
内容包括以下方面：
1. 你认为幸福是什么？
2. 描述一件令你感到幸福的事（需交代时间、地点、过程与感受）。
3. 以自己的感悟揭示：应该如何创造幸福。
写作要求：
1. 短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑；
2. 卷面干净整洁；
3. 词数 80 左右；
4. 开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
My Happiness
After reading Guo Mingyi’s “Happiness Is So Simple”, I am deeply moved by his view on happiness. As for
me,____________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.
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