On the other hand, 40％ think that fees should be charged(观点二) because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers(论据一), and to buy plants and young trees(论据二). They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.
Yours truly Li Hua 可以看出，这类文章的写作，首先要提出问题，即双方讨论的问题。接下来提出观点一，并用一系列论据进行阐明。说明完观点一之后，再提出观点二，继续用论据进行说明。如果需要说明自己的观点，可接下来说明自己的观点。
三、数据分析比较
此类题目要求考生通过对数据的分析比较得出某一结论或说明某一现象。在写作时不要对数据进行简单的列举，而是要通过对数据进行分析，得出某一结论。即应该通过对数据比较得出某物增长了多少或减少了多少，而不是简单的写成今年是多少去年是多少。时态常用一般现在时和一般过去时。写作方式最好采用逐个比较而不宜采用集中比较。写作格式一般是：说明现象→数据比较→得出结论。在写作时可用以下句型来组织完成整篇文章：
常用句型：
1. We can see from the chart that…. 我们可以从图表中看出…… 2. We can see from the table that… 我们可以从表格中看出……
We can see from the chart above that the environment in the Yellow River Valley is getting worse and worse.
3. A has increased by X%. A增长了X%。
4. A has doubled in the past five years. A在过去五年里增长了两倍。
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北京近年来交通工具发生了很大变化。
请根据下表和所给提示，用英语写一篇短文，以便刊登在某家对外发行的英语杂志上。 年份\\交通工具 2001 2002 特点 自行车 1,000,000 1,650,000 方便，健身 出租车 125,000 273,000 快捷，便宜 私人汽车 250,700 390,800 富有 公共汽车 17,600 18,900 慢，脏，拥挤 Along with the city development, the transport system is also changing(主题句). We did a survey on the different transportations.
According to the result, people more and more prefer convenient transportations, like taxi, which doubled in
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the past year(比较一). Besides, private cars have been increasing rapidly with the high living standard(比较二). While public bus, which was considered the main transport in the city, now is thought by most people dirty and crowded(比较三). But on the other hand, bicycle, as another traditional transportation, is still widely accepted for its convenience and benefit to people’s health(比较四).
In a word, people are enjoying an easier and more conventional life(总结句).
数据比较类文章通常也要求先提出主题句，即通过数据比较要说明的问题。接下来对数据进行比较。在边进行比较时边说明问题，在进行多项比较时，要注意句与句之间的过渡与衔接。最后要写好总结句，即你对这一现象作出自己的理解。
Part B 写作必备素材 助人为乐、 舍己救人
? Without thinking about her own safety, she rushed out and pulled him back. ? He hurried to school, reaching the schoolyard quite out of breath. ? She told the teacher what had happened to her on the way to school. ? The blind man was out of danger, but she lost her life./got injured. ? He was praised for what he had done.
? She offered us some gifts, but we refused to accept them. ? They all thanked him for his help.
? Wondering what to do, Tom saw a policeman. ? We hurried to the policeman for help.
? With the help of the policeman, we found the owner of the bag. ? A clever idea came to his mind. ? Then he put his idea into practice. ? I left the hospital without giving my name.
? This may be the most unforgettable experience of my life. ? He felt happy because he had done a good deed.
? It was not until then that I really understood the meaning of the proverb: ? ― Helping others is the source of happiness.‖ ? He will always be remembered as a hero. 近年来高考英语书面表达中的难句 第三节：涉及时间状语表达的句型
1. The other day Tom was walking along a river when he heard cries for help.
2. One morning Jack was on the point of getting in the wheat in the field when he caught sight of something
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strange flying overhead.
3. One afternoon Tom was on his way home when he saw a bird struggling on the grass. 4. One evening the family were watching TV when there was a blackout.
5. One night Peter was burying himself in doing his lessons when he felt the floor shaking slightly.
6. A few days ago Mary came across an old friend of hers and they greeted each other. 7. The other day Alice was taken to a holiday village where she enjoyed herself very much. 8. One summer night the girl was playing the piano when the phone began ringing.
9. One Saturday afternoon John was walking in the street when a strange car stopped in front of him. 10. One Friday evening the farmer was about to leave his house when he found his car stolen. 11. The next morning the Canadian friends left Hong Kong for Beijing. 12. The next afternoon I received a letter from Johnson. Part C 09年高考写作基本功训练(词组部分) 101. 摘棉花/苹果/桃/草莓/西瓜/梨 102. 告诉某人真像
103. 打工
104. 往瓶子/壶/杯子/脸盘里倒水 105. 分成4组
106. 中断会谈
107. 切断电源
108. 打长途电话 109. 与某人争吵某事 110. 得第一
111. 为某事责备某人 112. 向某人挥手致意 113. 往前走100米
114. 报名参加竞赛 115. 申请职位 116. 泄密
117. 送某人到门口 118. 呈现高兴的神情 119. 在操场站队
120. 坐在第一排 121. 记下某人的名字/电话号码/姓名/家庭住址
122. 走来走去 123. 动身前往… 124. 哄某人睡觉
125. 熬夜
126. 在小旅馆住宿 127. 严肃对待某事
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128. 把…钉在门上
129. 向某人保密
130. 建议不做某事
131. 不鼓励做某事
132. 退学
133. 开除某人/解雇某人
134. 一脚踩空
135. 把某物收捡起来
136. 绊了一跤
137. 摔了好几跤
138. 打中了某人的头
139. 牢记
140. 占太大空间
141. 扑灭火灾
142. 阻挡洪水
143. 识破阴谋
144. 苏醒过来
145. 闲逛
146. 看门
147. 看病
148. 看日出
149. 看书
150. 误拿了某物
09年高考写作基本功训练(句子汉译英部分)
1. 大路的另一边，即在原操场的位置建起了另一座新楼——我们的图书馆。 2. 众所周知，吸烟会导致许多疾病。
3. 首先应明确一点，我们上学不应当迟到或早退。 4. 由于粗心大意，汤姆错过了这个机会。 5. 上个月他父母为他买了一台新型电脑。
6. 我心里很明白父母为我付出的心血，所以我学习很努力。 7. 现在请允许我向各位介绍我们学校的若干规定。 8. 我很惊讶昨天竟在火车上见到一位多年不见的老朋友。
9. 我实在受不了那么大的噪音，弄得我实在不耐烦了，便只好去了解那是怎么回事。10. 近来我们班就北京动物园是否应当搬出城区进行过一场热烈的讨论。 11. 他可以利用电脑做许多事情。
12. 他妈妈一大早就叫醒他以便他能准时到达机场。 13. 去年十二月我想休假，但是有很多事情等着我去做。 14. 李华现在已经学会了如何操作电脑。
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15. 昨晚大约9点，我正在准备功课时，突然听见了很大的喧闹声。 16. 这张照片合我想起了我们在夏令营里度过的日子． （remind） 17. 假如你想从事这项工作，你必须先接受三个月的训练．（take up ） 18. 你一旦养成了坏习惯，改掉它是很难的． （once）
19. 同其他学生相比，那个女孩有更强的英语听、说能力． （compare） 20. 众所周知，成功来自勤奋，不努力则一事无成．
Part D书面表达周周练
EX. 1 : 请以My favorite Newspaper为题用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，介绍21世纪报，短文应包括下面表格中所提供的内容。
报纸名称及使用语言 出版地点及出版周期 版面内容 特色 目的 效果
EX. 2 : 假设你是李华。最近你班举行了一次班会，班会的主题是：太空探险的意义。请结合下表内容，给校报用英语写一篇文章，客观地介绍讨论的情况并表达你自己的观点。
一些同学赞同 ●获得新的知识 ●从太空取得新资源 ●扩大人类的生存空间 注意：1. 字数：80－120。
2. 标题与开头已写好，不计入总词数。
Outer Space Explorations, YES or NO?
We had an argument over whether it was necessary to carry out outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day.
一些同学反对 ●耗资巨大 ●宇航员的安全问题 ●？ 你自己的观点 21st Century, 英文报纸 北京，每周一期 每周新闻，今日世界，语言课堂，体育与音乐，学生报导 图文并茂 学习英语词汇，提高英语水平，获取各种信息 广为人知，深受喜爱 参考答案
词组汉译英
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