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作文模板: 大作文

首段举例:1

Never in human history have we experienced such an overwhelming problem of……(world wide pollution). The controversy largely centers at whether the …… (responsibility of dealing with it should be all on the hand of government). I tend to trust my intuition that…… (whoever pollutes should be cleaning it up) for reasons as follows. 首段举例:2

Never in our modern country have we witnessed such a great emphasis on ……(education of children). What especially concerns us in this issue is whether……(the responsibility of our public finance should focus more on very young children education or on universities).To the extent of my observation, having weighed up both sides, I am inclined to believe that……(the government should pay more attention to the young)for the following reasons.

中间段落结构: 平行段+并列段+让步段

In the first place, one compelling argument is that……

In addition,another indispensable part of my consideration is that…… And of course, I do not intend to create the impression here that……(论点)is all good. However , there is no escaping the fact that……(论点反面)

中间句扩充技巧:(1+2+3+4) 1、 扩展句 2、 因果局 3、 比较句 4、 例证句

1、扩展句:

1) It is truth universally acknowledged that…… 2) It is a poor story for our society that …… 3) It is a common belief/sense that…… 4) Common sense tells us that……

5) It is generally assumed that ……(我们通常假定)

6) It is always taken for granted that (我们想当然的以为) 7) It is widely accepted that……

2、因果句:

1) because/ because of 2) due to/ thanks to 3) owing to the fact that

4) the reason(结果) is that (原因) 5)A contribute to B = A lead to B 6) B result from A

7) sb. attributes B to A = B is attributed to A

3、比较句:

1)unlike (like)…… 2)just as ……,……

3)compared to……,…… 4)A is (not)as …… as B

5)A is superior to B; A is inferior to B

4、例证句:

1) 个人经历:personally,

My personal experience tells me that……

2)其他事件:for example;for instance ; A case in point is that

We don’t have to look further than the case of……,to find Support of this idea/ argument.

To illustrate this viewpoint, I can not fink of a better example than……

3)数据调查:we are living in exponential times. According to the statistics,it is predicted that…

Data from a recently conducted survey by a related department

estimated that……

Sometimes,number does number. It is estimated that/ to be ……

(有时,数字不愧是数字,它显示出)

4/让步段材料;

1) however, they overlook one basic fact that

2) a singular example may never lead to any universal truth 3) they only stand on the behalf of the minority 4) they fail to look at the matter in the long run 5) they fail to look at the whole picture

6) Nevertheless, what I need to emphasize here is that most of these issues

can be solved or even prevented with the development of technology.

并列段举例:

In the first place, one compelling argument is that the improvement in modern transportation and accommodation has brought convenience in people’s life. It is common belief that the rapid development of our daily means of transport such as bus, automobile, subway and so on has a significant effect on human life. Owing to the fact, people can save time and take easy way to commute during hour traffic. To illustrate this viewpoint, I can not think of a better example than private cars. Compared with walking on foot, it is

dramatically fast and driving is not as complicated as operating a carriage. The importance of modern technology is clear to us.

In addition,another indispensable part of my consideration is that the efficiency in communication has been greatly improved by the development of technology. It is a truth universally acknowledged that the modern society has a desperate need for efficiency especially in commercial practice or an educational environment. Compared to the past, it took people then one to six months to write letters and made it reach to other end of communication, if the distance was too far away. The present-day society has witnessed the huge amount of time being saved by using computers and E-mails. Sometimes, this can be minimized to as quickly as one second.

And of course, I do not intend to create the impression here that technology is all good. However, there is no escaping the fact that technology also has some disadvantages like wars, pollutions, and the decline of our health. We admit that some modern problems of society are attributed to the application of the bad parts and the mistaken extension beyond our law and humanity. Nevertheless, what I need to emphasize here is that most of these issues can be solved or even prevented with the development of technology. They fail to look at the matter in the long run.

结尾段落:(表态+论述) 1)、转述论点 2)、总结论点 3)、引申结束

In the final analysis, I am still of the firm opinion that……,and sum up the given reasons discussed above, we can safely reach the conclusion that choosing…… is a rather wise decision if……. 结尾段示例:

In the final analysis, I am still of the firm opinion that it is necessary for college students to work on a part-time job during there college years. And sum up the given reasons discussed above, we can safely reach the conclusion that choosing part-time job is a rather wise decision if these students pay more attention to their safety problems and try not to be money-obsessed individuals. It is on a whole an optional act to us to work before graduation.

小作文

综合写作: Introduction:

? Overall, the speaker refutes(反驳) the reading materials argument about___1主题___ by providing contradictory(反对的)evidence concerning several critical respects (aspects) listed below.

? In summary, the lecture casts serious doubt on the reading passages in the

discussion of whether ___1主题 ____ by questioning the following essential parts of the argument.

Body paragraph 1:

? The speaker begins by pointing out that___2听力反驳的第一个层面___

? While the reading passages maintains that___3阅读的相关内容 ____,this point is invalidated by the listening material because the speaker argue that___*4听力第一论据 ____

Body paragraph 2:

? Next, the Speaker continues his refutation against the view expressed in the reading with the aid of the fact that___*5听力材料第二层面___.

? Although ___6阅读相关内容____, the speaker completely disagrees it and prove that ____*7听力第二论点的论据___.

Body paragraph3:

? In terms of ___8听力第三个层面___, the passage and the lecture reach nothing but a disagreement.

? Differing from the former which claims that____9阅读相关内容___, the latter remains a suspicious attitude that___*10 听力第三点论据___.

综合写作例文:

Overall,the speaker refutes the reading materials argument about The School Uniform Policy, by providing contradictory evidence concerning several aspects listed below. In summary, the lecture casts serious doubt on the reading passages in the discussion of whether schools should implement a compulsory School Uniform Policy.

The speaker begins by pointing out that cost and expenses in carrying out this policy. While the reading passage maintains that wearing school uniform is to reduce family’s economic burden, this point is invalidated by the listening material because the speaker argues that school uniform will require additional spending of buying more cloths and they are not very likely to be wore for a long time.

Next, the speaker continues his refutation against the view expressed in the reading with the aid of the fact that it has a negative influence on students’ academic performance. Although this policy tends to reduce transformation and save time in choosing cloths, students show the opposite result and may do harm to individual students taste and freedom.

In terms of the connection between wearing trendy cloths and occurrence of violence events, the passage and the lecture reach nothing but a disagreement. Differing from the former which claims that to wear personal and fashionable clothes may incur violence in school environments, the latter remains a

suspicious attitude that this approach is far from effective and suggests that alternative methods such as being kind, walking with company and so on.

口语:

第一题:personal preference What:观点表达句+比较级

According to my understanding,the greatest leader of all times was Mahatma Gandhi . and I have several reasons for that. Why:to begin with,——,for example,—— Besides,——,simply because,—— So,——

替换:I think/ believe/ suppose / guess/ bet In my opinion/ I assume that According to my understanding As far as I am concerned I hold the opinion that

I am under the impression that I got the feeling that 并列结构:

To begin with; Also,personally speaking For one thing; nevertheless,I believe that First and foremost; in addition

For one thing; in the second place, First; That,however,…… Like & Dislike:

My favorite ……is

I love/ enjoy/ have a fancy for/ have a great affection for I care for/ do fancy for I find my self addicted to

I absolutely am into/ crazy about I am a (mobile) nut/ a big fun

Sth. Entertains/ relaxes/ amuses/ recreates me more than anyting else in

the world.

Sth. kills most of my spare time

sth. is my most effective time killer/ pain killer Reasons & Examples:

Why this is my favorite? One reason is that…… Couple of reasons for that

And I have several reasons for that. GE & SE

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