2016高考作文复习(学生版)(3)

proper way to do so, for it better arranged, they can be reused.

I wonder if the school could set up specific rules against such behavior. At the same time, “students should be encouraged to sort out their books. We can keep some special books as part of our memories, which may remind us of our golden past later in life. In addition, giving some away to the Senior One or Tow studetns is a good idea. They will be grateful for our kindness. Beside, a low-carbon life is being ncouraged. Dealing with the used books in proper ways can reduce the carbon dioxide that we cause or produce. Thank you for your consideration. Your faithfully, Li Hua

七．约稿信

约稿信是指报纸、杂志、文化栏目等媒体邀请别人写稿的信件。在信中需要介绍该媒体的栏目特点和媒体的受众范围。在约稿时要指定稿件的内容(约稿发起人既可以规定要写作的内容，也可让被约稿人根据媒体和栏目的性质自己拟定写作题目和内容)，并且要约定稿件大致的篇幅和交稿日期。

I. 典型范文背诵：(2015全国卷I)

假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下： 1. 栏目介绍。 2. 稿件内容；

3. 稿件长度：约400词汇 4. 交稿日期：6月28日前天 注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的； 3. 开头语已为你写好。 Dear Peter,

I’d like to ask you write an article for our school’s English newspaper.

The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the culture in your part of the Unite State? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant. 400 words would be fine. Could you have your article before June 28?

I?m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua

II.常用的表达

1.我想请你为……写一篇文章

I would like to ask you to write an article for… 2. 你可以写一些关于……

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You can write something about… 3. ……是很受……欢迎的

…is very popular with…/among… 4. 它刊登的文章是由……写的

It carries articles written by… 5. 你能写点关于……吗?

Would you please write something about…? 6. 我们会特别欢迎有关……的文章

We would especially welcome passages about… 7. 你可以写与……相关的任何东西

You can write anything relevant to… 8. 约120个词就好。

About 120 words would be fine. 9. 我们在……之前能收到你的文章吗?

Could we have your article before…? 10. 体育专栏/娱乐专栏

sports column/entertainment column

11. 栏目特点 characteristics of the column 12. 读者范围 scope of readers 13. 语言风格 language style 14. 改编自 be adapted from

15. 延长截止日期extend the deadline III. 常用的句式表达

1.我期待您的答复在您最方便的时候。

I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.

2.我想请你为我们学校的英文报纸写一篇文章。 I?d like to ask you to write an article for our school?s English newspaper.

3.你能写点关于你的学校生活吗？

Can you write something about your school life? 4. 我期待你的回复。

I am looking forward to your reply.

5. 你最好下星期日把你的文章发送给我，字数约120个字就好。

You?d better send your article to me next Sunday and about 120 words would be fine. IV. 习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文) Dear Nancy,

I?d like to ask you write an article for our school?s English magazine. The “Nature” section provide a nice platform for us students to learn more about nature. In this section there are the wide variety of English materials availability to English learners. And here are some relevant detail about the articles we were eager for. Firstly, not only can you write anything about the life of wild animals, but also you can focus at the knowledge about natural plants. Secondly, your article can have a title which made up by yourself with a vocabulary of about 300. Finally, you may

finished your article by March 18.

I?m looking forward to your reply soon.

Yours, Li Hua

V. 模拟训练题：

1. 假定你是李华，你校英文报“英语之声”栏目拟刊登外国笔友介绍怎样学好英语的文章。请你给英国朋友Jack写一封约稿信向他约稿。要点如下：

1. 怎样练习听说读写。 2. 怎样记单词。

3. 稿件长度：约300词。 4. 交稿日期：4月20日前。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Jack,

I would like to ask you to write an article for our school?s English newspaper. The “Voice of English” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about “How to learn English well”. Would you please write something about the learning methods of listening, speaking, reading and writing? And we would especially welcome articles about the best way to remember new words. Would you keep a vocabulary notebook? By the way, your article may have a title made up by yourself. About 300 words would be fine. Could I have your article before April 20th? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua

2. 假定你是李华，你校英文报“英语角”栏目拟刊登外国笔友介绍自己家乡近十年的变化的文章。请你给英国朋友Mike写一封约稿信向他约稿。要点如下：

1. 衣食住行的变化。 2. 环境变化。

3. 稿件长度：约300词。 4. 交稿日期：5月15日前。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Mike,

I would like to ask you to write an article for our school?s English newspaper. The “English Corner” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about their hometowns. Would you please write something about the changes of food, clothing, housing and transportation in recent 10 years?

And we would especially welcome articles about the changes of the environment, especially the mountains and the rivers. By the way, your article may have a title made up by yourself. 300 words would be fine. Could I have your article before

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May 15th?

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours Li Hua

八、邀请信

邀请信包括宴会、舞会、晚餐、婚礼等各种邀请信件。要求叙事一定要清楚、明白，要写清楚三个方面的内容：

1. 发出邀请；邀请对方参加活动的具体内容、时间和地点; 2. 邀请对方的原因。 3. 期待对方接受邀请。 I.邀请信模板; Dear _______, There will be a _________(内容) at/in ______(地点) on ________(时间). We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at ______(具体时间)。 This will be followed by a _________(进一步的安排). At around __________(时间), we will have ________(另一个安排). Ring me up and tell me whether you will come or not, will you? I really hope you can make it. My phone number is _____. Looking forward to _________. Your sincerely Li Hua Dear________ , I?m writing to invite you to ______(开门见山提出事件/活动) to be held/hosted by ______(举办机构) at/in _______（活动地点）______ on(活动时间)。It would be pleasant/honored to have you here. During the party/conference, we will have lots of activities you will be interested in. First, ______(要举行的活动内容一). Second, ________(要举行的活动内容二). I know/believe that you will be very interested in________(引出受邀请人参加的理由). First/For one thing, _________(受邀请人参加的理由一). Second/For another, _____________(受邀请人参加的理由二). The conference/party would not be complete without you! The party/conference will begin at _______(提出活动的地点). Is it possible for us to meet at the _______(具体约定时间) and we do hope you can come. Yours, Li Hua II.常用的表达：

1. 邀请某人做某事 invite sb. to do sth. 2. 代表某人 on behalf of sb.

3. 为了做某事 in order/aiming to do sth.

4. 计划/打算做某事plan/intend to do sth. 5. 拓展某人的视野 broaden one?s horizons 6. 丰富某人的生活 enrich one?s life

7. 接受某人的邀请 accept one?s invitation 8. 玩得开心 have a good time/enjoy oneself 9. 在学校会议厅 in the school meeting hall 10. 表演节目 give performances 11. 渴望你的到来long for your coming 12. 学生会 the Students? Union 13. 参加聚会 participate in the party 14. 给某人留下深刻的印象 make a deep impression on sb.

15. 有信心 have the confidence that… III. 常用的句式表达

1. 作为他们的代表，我写信是想邀请你…… On behalf of them, I am writing to invite you… 2. 这是(关于这次活动的)简要日程计划表。首先，……其次，……最后，……

Here is a brief schedule (about this activity). First and foremost, … In addition, … Last but not least, …

3. 将会有很多的活动，例如……

There will be many activities, such as…and so on. 4. 我真诚地希望你能接受我们的邀请/加入我们，以及我相信……

I sincerely hope you can accept our invitation /join us and I have the confidence that… 5. 方便的时候请告知我你的决定。

Please let me know your decision if it is convenient for you.

IV. 习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文) Hi Susan,

We?re throwing a surprise party for Laura?s birthday. We?d like to invite you to the party. We want to give her a surprise, but please keep quiet about it. We?ll gather at the Students? Club at 8:00 p.m. in this Friday, after the evening classes. And it will last about an hour. We each will prepare for a little present. When she come, we?ll light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday” together for him. Then the cake will be cutting and we?ll sing songs and play game. It?ll be nice to see how exciting she will be. I?m surely you?ll have good time at the party, too.

Yours,

Li Hua

V.典型范文背诵：［2012全国卷II］

假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括：

⒈ 时间：周五晚8点至9点

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⒉ 地点：学生俱乐部

⒊ 内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等 ⒋ 要求：备小礼物 注意：

⒈ 词数100左右，开头语已为你写好； ⒉可以适当增加细节，以便行文连贯； ⒊ 答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上。 Hi, Susan,

We?re throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming?s birthday. We?d like to invite you to the party. We want to give him a surprise, so please keep quiet about it. We?ll gather at the Students? Club at 8 p.m. this Friday, after the evening classes. And it?s going to last about an hour. We each will prepare a little present. When he comes, we?ll light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday” together for him. Then the cake will be cut and we?ll sing songs and play games. It?ll be nice to see how excited he will be. I?m sure you?ll have a good time at the party, too.

Yours, Li Hua

IV. 模拟训练题：

1.假定你是学生会主席李华，学生会将举办迎新联欢晚会，你希望外籍教师Tom能参加，于是你给他写一封邀请信。要点如下：

1. 晚会开始、结束时间以及举办地点。 2. 表演内容。

3. 邀请对方参加的原因以及询问对方的意向。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Tom,

How are you doing? Currently, in order to welcome the new students, an evening party will be held in our school. As the chairman of the Students? Union, I?m writing to invite you to join us.

Here is a brief schedule. First, it will be held in the school meeting hall from 7:00 to 9:00 p. m. next Sunday. Additionally, there will be many wonderful performances presented by the teachers and students, such as singing, dancing, performing plays and so on. Everyone is longing for your coming, and it would be more cheerful if you could give a performance.

I sincerely hope that you can accept our invitation and I have the confidence that we students would be extremely delighted to see you. Please let me know your decision if it is convenient for you.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours, Li Hua

2.假定你叫李华，是高三(1)班的班长，计划和同学们在儿童节那天去儿童福利院(Children Welfare Institute)献爱心。请你给外教Kate写一封邮件，邀请她一同前往。要点如下：

1. 出发与返回时间。

2. 活动：赠送礼物、表演节目、玩游戏等。 3. 邀请对方参加的原因以及询问对方的意向。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Kate,

How are you doing? We students intend to go to the Children Welfare Institute on the Children?s Day aiming to know more about the children there. As a monitor, on behalf of my classmates, I?m writing to invite you to come with us.

Here is a brief schedule. First, we will leave school by bus at 7:00 a.m. and return at 5:00 p.m. After lunch, there will be many activities, such as giving gifts, giving performances, playing games with them. etc., which will be not only meaningful but also interesting.

I sincerely hope that you can join us and I have the confidence that you?ll have a joyful and meaningful day then. Please let me know your decision if it’s convenient for you.

I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua

九、投诉信

投诉信是人们在遇到一些不文明现象、所购商品质量差、售后服务不满意等情况下解决问题的一个方法。在语言方面，要注意把握分寸，要公平、公正。

投诉信应包括三个方面的内容： 1. 表明写信目的，投诉的内容。 2. 投诉的具体原因。

3. 希望得到的结果/ 提出解决办法。 I. 投诉信的写作模板： 投诉信的写作模板一： Dear Sir/Madam, My name is/ I am _____________(写信人身份)。I am writing to you for something/ to tell you about_____________(抱怨内容)。 The focus of the complaint is _________(抱怨内容的核心)。For one thing, __________(抱怨内容的一个方面)。For another, __________(抱怨内容的另一方面)。Honestly speaking/ To be honest, ____________(客观的评论)。But _____________(抱怨产生的原因)。 All in all, There is still much room for improvement. Before I take any further action, I do hope/ I require that ___________(表达本人的愿望)。 Thank you for your time and kind consideration. 投诉信的写作模板二 Dear_______, I am_______ (自我介绍). I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about _____________(投诉内容).

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The reason for my dissatisfaction is _____(总体介绍). In the first place,_________ (抱怨的第一个方面).In addition, _________ (抱怨的第二个方面). Under these circumstances, the devastating effect could be multiplied if this problem cannot be handled immediately. (如该问题不能立即解决，它将产生更坏影响).I would appreciate it very much if you could __________(提出建议和请求), preferably __________(进一步的要求), and I would like to have this matter settled by __________(设定解决事情最后期限). Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply. Your sincerely, Li Hua II.常用短语表达 1. 抱怨 complain about

2. 表达不满 convey/express one?s dissatisfaction 3. 忍受 put up with/bear

4. 对……满意 be content/satisfied with 5. 糟糕的服务 poor service

6. 采取措施take measures 7. 解决问题 deal with/solve the problem 8. 预防……发生 prevent…from happening 9. 调查此次事件

investigate/look into the matter/incident 10. 以粗鲁的方式 in a rude manner

11. 向…道make an apology to…/apologize to… 12. 出乎意料 out of one?s expectation 13. 不用说 needless to say 14. 尽快 as soon as possible

15. 把某事牢记在心 bear sth. in mind III.常用句式表达：

1. 我写信是投诉关于……I am writing to

complain about…

2. 这几年我对你们的服务都很满意，但是我写

信是表达关于……的不满。

I have been content/satisfied with your service for years but I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about…

3. 我对……不满意有一些主要原因。首先，……更糟糕的是，……最后，……

There are some main reasons why I am not content with… At first, … What?s worse, … Eventually, …

4. 我真诚地希望你能认真调查这件事情，以及采取恰当的措施防止类似事件再次发生。

I sincerely hope that/It is my sincere hope that you will look into/investigate the matter/incident seriously and proper measures should be taken to prevent such an incident happening again.

5. 你若能尽快采取措施处理这个问题，我将感激不尽。

I would appreciate it very much if you could take measures to deal with/solve the problem as soon as possible.

IV.习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文)

Dear Sir,

I?m writing to express my dissatisfaction about the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought in 20th Apr. 2015 at Teemall. Ten days before that, it didn?t ring or sent text messages. Then I took them to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three month for a new one. Later I went to the repairman. He said since it was a new model in China, it was impossibly to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hear that. What can I wait that long? Therefore, I sincerely hope you can send to me a new one of same model. I would greatly appreciate it if you could take measures to solve the problem as soon as possible. Sincerely yours,

Bu Manyi V. 模拟训练题：

1. 假定你是李华，上周六，你有一次不愉快的就餐经历，对餐厅的服务员态度非常不满意。于是你给该餐厅老板写一封投诉信。要点如下： 1. 问题：牛肉面有苍蝇，服务员态度粗鲁。 2. 要求：餐厅赔礼道歉。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Sir,

I am Li Hua, a frequent customer in your restaurant. I have been pleased with your excellent service for years but now I?m writing to express my dissatisfaction about the poor service of your waiters.

Last Saturday, I went to your restaurant to have lunch but I had an awful experience. When having beef noodles, I suddenly found there were two flies in them, which disgusted me a lot. So I asked the waiter to change another dish. Out of my expectation, he didn?t change it but said in a rude manner that he was too busy to solve the problem. Needless to say, such a way of treating customers is unacceptable.

It’s my sincere hope that you can investigate the matter seriously and make a formal apology to me.

I look forward to a better service next time. Sincerely yours, Li Hua

2. 假定你是李华，你在上周日搭坐102号公交车，该公交车司机的不文明行为让乘客很愤怒。于是你向公交车公司写一封投诉信。要点如下：

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1. 司机的不文明行为(大声讲话、紧急刹车、态

度粗鲁等)。

2. 希望尽快查清此事。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Sir,

I am Li Hua. I am writing to complain about one of your bus-drivers? improper and rude behaviors.

Last Sunday, I was taking the No. 102 bus whose driver not only kept on talking with a man loudly but also drove very fast. So some passengers advised him to concentrate on driving, but he didn?t pay any attention. What’s worse, he drove even faster. Then another passenger couldn’t bear it, asking the driver to keep the passengers’ safety in mind. But the driver stopped the bus so suddenly that all the passengers nearly lost their balance. However, he didn?t apologize but said rudely “It?s none of your business.”

I sincerely hope you can investigate this incident and proper measures should be taken to prevent such an incident happening again.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua VI. 更多关于投诉信的范文背诵： 1.假定你是李华，两周前你从网上订购了一套英语书虫系列读物，昨天才到货，且包装破损、数量不足。请就此向网店客服写邮件投诉。要点如下：

1．介绍购物情况： 2．反映存在问题： 3．提出解决方案。

可能用到的生词：投诉complaint n． To whom it may concern,

I?m one of your customers. I ordered a set of Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn?t receive them until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing.

I’m sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with this problem. I hope that you either return my money or deliver a new set of books to me. Besides, I?d like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint.

Looking forward to your reply. Li Hua 2.假定你是李华，乘飞机从北京到伦敦旅游。到达目的地取行李时发现行李箱破损，部分物品遗失。你与相关人员交涉无果，于是向航空公司写了一封投诉信。 内容主要包括:

1.说明个人信息（航线、航班：MMYZ577; 时间：April 28）

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