2016高考作文复习(学生版)(2)

Hoping to hear from you soon.

Yours, Li Hua

VI. 模拟训练题：

1.假定你是李华，现在是华南师范大学(South China Normal University)大一新生你高三时在王老师的帮助下，英语进步很大，为表示感谢，给王老师写一封感谢信。要点如下： 1. 梦想成真，考上理想大学。

2. 因为王老师的辅导和鼓励，英语由差变好。 3. 对老师表示祝福。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 One possible version (参考范文) Dear Mr. Wang,

Again, I sincerely thank you for your help! I am writing to express my thanks for helping me improve my English. Without your help, I would not be a student of South China Normal University. I still remember the days when you taught me English in Grade 3 of senior school. My English was once poor, but you were very patient with me and tried to tutor me after class. My English was greatly improved because of your encouragement. Without your help, I wouldn?t have realized my dream. I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. Wish you have a healthy body and lead a happy life!

Again, I sincerely thank you for your help!

Yours, Li Hua

2.假定你是李华，去年是一名交换生(exchange student)去美国学习，得到布朗一家的照顾，回国后写一封感谢信给布朗夫妇，要点如下： 1. 感谢生活上的关心，克服了思乡病。 2. 感谢学习上的帮助，口语进步很大。 3. 欢迎到中国做客。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 One possible version (参考范文) Dear Mr. and Mrs. Brown,

How are things going with you recently? Thank you so much for giving me a chance to live in your family while I was an exchange student in America! That was such a hard time for me, but your kindness and warm heart did let me overcome my homesickness. Besides, you tutored me in my spoken English in daily life. With your help, I made such rapid progress that I won the first place in the English Speaking Competition of the city. My achievement is owed to your help. If there is a chance, welcome to China, I am looking forward to your coming. All the best.

Yours, Li Hua

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四、道歉信

道歉信是指因过失或疏忽等做错了事，给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后给对方赔礼道歉并请求对方原谅的信件。通常包括以下三部分内容：

1. 开门见山，表明写信目的，表示歉意。 2. 说明出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施。 3. 再次致歉，请求原谅，希望得到理解(语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实)。 I 道歉信的写作模板： Dear _________, I am truly sorry that _____________(道歉的原因). The reason is that ______________(介绍原因). Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience I’ve caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. Your sincerely, Li Hua II.常用短语表达 1.因某事向某人道歉 apologize to sb. for sth. / make an apology to sb. for sth. 2. 向……说对不起 say sorry to

3. 接受我的道歉 accept my apology 4. 为某事原谅某人 forgive sb. for sth.

5. 并非故意做某事 have no intention to do sth. 6. 弥补；赔偿 make up for

7. 赔偿；偿还 pay for / compensate for 8. 给你带来不便 cause you inconvenience 9. 给你带来许多麻烦 cause you much trouble 10. 更加小心 be more careful

11. 犯这样愚蠢的错误 make such a stupid mistake

12. 应当受到责备 be to blame

13. 承担责任 be responsible for/shoulder

/undertake the responsibility 14. 难以接受的后果

an unacceptable result/consequence 15. 下不为例 never let it happen again III.常用的句式表达：

1. 我写这封信是因……向你致歉。 I am writing to apologize for … / I am writing to say sorry for… 2. 请接受我真诚的道歉。

Please accept my sincere apology.

3. 对于我说的话/做的事，我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信，我并非故意要……

I am indeed very sorry for what I said/did, but please believe I had no intention to…

4. 我真心希望你能理解我的处境/设身处地地为我考虑，并接受我的道歉。

I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apology.

5. 对于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。

Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.

IV.习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文) Dear Sir/Madam,

I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrow from your library last week. The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts. I read them every evening and intend to finish it the next week, but unfortunately yesterday until I came back to my room, it was nowhere to be found. I promise to pay for the lost of the book. I know money cannot cover the loss and I am blame. I will go to your place in Thursday afternoon to talk over the compensation(赔偿) for the missed book.

I apologize again for any inconveniences or trouble caused by my careless. I promise that such a thing will never happen again. Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

V. 模拟训练题：

1. 假定你是李华，寒假中作为交流生短期去英国培训，回国时因为匆忙，把房东Bob的音乐光盘夹在行李中带了回来。现在请你给Bob写一封道歉信，要点如下：

1. 对自己带走音乐光盘表示歉意。 2. 提出解决的办法。 3. 再次请求原谅。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Bob,

I am writing to make an apology to you for I forgot to return a music CD which I borrowed from you last week. Yesterday I came back from England and found it in my luggage. I am so sorry that you cannot listen to it at present.

The CD which I borrowed from you is made in England, so I believe you can find another one in your local store. How about your buying another CD by yourself and I will pay for it? If you cannot find a similar one, I would send it back to you through a post office. And if there are any other solutions you like, please let me know. I am terribly sorry again for my carelessness. Please forgive me for any inconvenience caused. I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

2.假定你是李华，你的美国老师Mr. Evans要求

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你们明天下午去听一个英国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。请你写一封信向Mr. Evans道歉并说明情况。要点如下： 1. 表示歉意。

2. 理由：父亲去北京出差，母亲生病住院需要人照顾。

3. 询问：是否有录音，以便补听讲座。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Mr. Evans,

I am indeed sorry to tell you that I won?t be able to attend the lecture on English history tomorrow afternoon. My mother suddenly fell ill and was taken to hospital last night and my father is on a business trip to Beijing now. I am afraid that I will have to take care of her these days. However, I am actually very interested in English society and history. I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded, and if so, could I borrow the tape? It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.

Please allow me to say sorry again. I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and accept my apology.

Yours sincerely, Li Hua

五、祝贺信

祝贺信是指在日常生活中，得知同学或朋友竞赛获奖、考上大学、结婚、过新年或重大节日等，给对方祝贺的信件。书写时应做到真诚、自然、亲切动人。祝贺信通常包括

以下内容：祝贺事由→所取得的成绩→被祝贺人过去的努力→被祝贺人的优点→表达自己的愿望。

I. 习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文) Dear Henry,

I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations your admission into the Biology Department of Peking University as a graduation. As your close friend, I just want you to know what lucky I am to be able to share your pride and how pleased I was at your admission. In my views, you work hard and besides that, you are a very intelligence person. This admission is a reward where you richly deserve. I am sure you will make a greater progress in your study and obtain a brightly future in your life.

I wish you greater success in your school

career and I am look forward to good news from you soon. Best wishes.

Yours, Li Hua

II.典型范文背诵： 假定你是李华，你的一位朋友Jane在中国学习中文两年，即将回国。现在由你给她发E-mail邀请她参加为他举行的欢送会（farewell party），要点如下：

1.祝贺她顺利通过考试，她的学习进步很大，为她骄傲。

2. 感谢他帮助你们学习。 3. 时间：星期六晚6点。

4. 地点：阳光俱乐部（The Sun Club）302房间 5. 路线；在Jane所住的宾馆门口坐332路公共汽车可直达。 Dear Jane,

Congratulations on your passing all the exam. I am delighted you have really made progress in your two years of studying in China. All you have gained is the result of your hard work. We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English. We?ll always remember the wonderful time we spent together.

It?s a pity that you have to go back soon! So a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come by 6:00 p.m.? we?ll have dinner together. By the way, you may take Bus No. 332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club. I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead!

Your faithfully Li Hua III.常用短语表达：

1. 恭喜/祝贺……congratulations on… 2. 实现/成真come true

3. 很高兴听到……How happy I am to hear… 4. 很高兴知道你……

I have learned with delight that you… 5. 我想表达我对……的祝贺

I would like to express my congratulations on… 6. 我为你……感到非常高兴 I feel very happy for you (r)… 7. ……是相当令人振奋的消息！ …...is quite exciting news! 8. 我知道这肯定是因为…… I know this is surely owing to… 9. 是你非常值得的奖赏

It is a reward that you richly deserve for your… 10. 我希望……I hope…

11. 请接受……Please accept…

12. 祝你一切顺利! Wish you all the best! 13. 你们是天生的一对!

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You two are a perfect match! 14. 祝你心想事成!

May all your wishes come true! 15. 祝你年年有今日，岁岁有今朝。

I wish you many happy returns of the day. IV.常用的句式表达;

1. 我很高兴你梦想成真。

I feel very happy for your dream has come true.

2. 我写这封信是为了表达我对你英语演讲比赛获得第一名的祝贺。

I am writing to express my congratulations on your winning the first place in the English speech contest.

3. 祝贺你高考成功。

Congratulations on your success in the National College Entrance Examination. 4. 请接受我最诚挚的问候。

Please accept my warmest regards. 5. 我希望你的未来是灿烂的。 I hope your future will be glorious.

V. 模拟训练题： 1.假定你是李华，得知你的好友王强今年考上了北京大学(Peking University)，他来自贫困地区，是村里的第一位大学生。请你给他写一封祝贺信，要点如下：

1. 考上理想大学，父母骄傲。 2. 努力学习将来为家乡服务。 3. 对未来祝福。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Wang Qiang,

Congratulations! I have learned with delight that you are admitted to Peking University, your ideal one! I know you have worked very hard in the past years, so I?m truly happy to know that you become the first college student of your village from the poor areas. I am sure your parents are greatly proud of you. I just want you to know how pleased I am to witness your success. This is a new start for you and it?s good for you to study with so many excellent students and learn from top professors. I wish you greater success in university and serve for the hometown in the future. Best wishes!

Yours, Li Hua

2. 假定你是李华，得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。你为他感到骄傲，并给他写一封祝贺信，要点如下：

1. 天天练习讲汉语，从不会到流利，终于成功。 2. 继续努力，有机会来中国留学。 3. 希望见面和交流。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

参考词汇：“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛 方面)。In addition, __________(其他的建议)，I “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest am sure_________ (对建议内容所作的承诺)。 Dear Peter, Please inform me__________( 期望被建议 I would like to express my congratulations 人作出的回应)。 to you on your receiving the first prize of “Chinese Your sincerely Bridge” Chinese speech contest. I know that you Li Hua were not good at Chinese at first. However, you I. 常用的表达： practiced speaking Chinese every day. As the 1. 给某人提建议 give sb. some advice (on) saying goes, “Everything comes to him who 2. 如下 as follow waits”. Finally, you succeeded! In my mind, this 3. 在做某事时遇到困难 match is very difficult for a foreign student. So have difficulty/trouble in doing sth. I?m so surprised that you become champion of this 4. 利用 make use of competition. If you go on studying Chinese harder, 5. 向某人征求意见 ask sb. for advice you will have the opportunity to study in China. At 6. 制订计划 make a plan last, I hope to see you and communicate with each 7. 认为……有用 other. find…helpful/useful/beneficial Sincere congratulations to you again! 8. 参加 take part in/participate in

Yours, 9. 听从某人的建议 follow one?s advice Li Hua 10. 把……考虑在内

take sth. into account/consideration

11. 得到改善 get improved 六、建议信

12. 有所好转 change for the better 建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方

13. 依我看来 in my opinion/in my view/ 接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题。建议

from my point of view 信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当

14. 我已收到你的来信，得知你…… 先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具

I have received your letter saying that you… 有合理性和说服力。通常包括：

15. 我建议…… 1. 说明写信目的(点出建议的主题)。

I would like to suggest that…/ 2. 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告。

I would like to make a recommendation that…/ 3. 表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。

I am writing to advise you of…/ 建议信模板一： If I were you, I would…/ Dear ________, May I suggest that…/ You have asked me for my advice with regard I would like to put forward the suggestion to _____ (问题), and I will try to make some that… conductive suggestions here. II.常用的句式表达： In my humble(谦虚的) opinion, you would 1. 你就……向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建be wise to take the following actions (建议的内设性的建议。 容): First, ________. (As is known, ________.) You have asked me for my advice with regard Second, (to make economic profits, ) ________. to…and I will try to make some constructive Third, ________. (As many of them ________.) I hope you will find these proposals useful, suggestions.

2. 我觉得如果能够……将会很有帮助的。 and I would be ready to discuss this matter with I feel that it would be beneficial if… you to further details. (Or：Your kind consideration 3. 我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。 of my suggestions will be highly appreciated)． Good Luck with your_______(祝愿). I hope you will find these suggestions

helpful/useful. Yours sincerely 4. 我相信你会考虑我的建议的。 Li Hua I trust you?ll take my suggestion into account./I trust you?ll take good consideration of my 建议信模板二 suggestion. Dear_________, 5. 如能看到……我会非常开心的。 I am delighted to learn that ______(写信的原 . I would be more than happy to see… 因)。In my opinion, ________________(表述建议III. 习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文) 内容)。On the one hand, _________(提出建议的Dear Roy, 理由一)。On the other hand, _________ (建议的理由二)。 As to _____________(具体到某一方 I am glad to receive your letter ask for my 面的建议)，I suggest __________(建议内容)。If advice to how to learn Chinese well. ____________(供被建议人选择的条件)，It is unnecessary for you to _______(建议内容的另一 Here are few suggestions. First, this is

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important to take a Chinese course, as you?ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspaper and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Beside, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you?ll learn and remember Chinese words more easier. You can also make more Chinese friends. He will tell you a lot about China or help you learn Chinese.

Try and write to me in Chinese the next time.

Best wishes!

Yours truly, Li Hua

IV. 模拟训练题：

1.假定你是李华，请根据所给材料，给Lora写一封回信。要点如下：

1. Lora打算利用暑假打工。 2. Lora父母不同意的理由。 3. 你给Lora的具体建议。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

Dear Lora,

I have just read your letter in the magazine. I know that you want to work part-time this summer. But your parents don?t allow you to do so. I understand your situation.

I think your parents may have their reasons. They may regard learning as the most important task for you. Perhaps they?d like you to make use of this summer holiday to study. Besides, they may think you are too young to work.

I think you had better have a talk with your

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parents. If they agree, you should make a detailed plan for your study and work, ask your friends to work together with you, and tell your parents not to worry about you because you are old enough to manage things properly.

Anyway, I would be more than happy to wish you a pleasant summer. Yours truly, Li Hua

2.假定你是李华，最近你们班从英国转来了一名新生Jenny。这是她第一次远离家乡，她很想念父母及家人，有时候思念至深，常常独自一个人深夜哭泣。对此，请你给Jenny写一封建议信，要点如下：

1. 鼓励Jenny坚定求学信念，志存高远，四海为家。

2. 就Jenny的目前状况，提两到三个建议。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Jenny,

I am so glad to have a talk with you. I understand your present situation for I have had a similar experience before.

People often miss their parents the first time they leave home. Most people do have to leave home for higher education or employment. I think you should realize that present separation will help with your academic development and your improvement of personal ability.

Try to make friends on your school campus, and share ideas with your classmates who are physically closest to you now. Maybe you will still miss your parents, but your new friends will bring happiness and joy to your new life. Also I suggest you take an active part in different kinds of activities in school. You will get much pleasure from it.

Wish you happy every day. Yours faithfully, Li Hua

V. 更多关于建议信的范文背诵:

假设你是高三学生李华，面临毕业，你发现许多学生正准备把旧课本当废品扔掉，你认为这样是浪费。请你用英语根据下列要点给某英语报社写一封信，并针对此现象提出建议。 信中应包括以下内容：1. 说明写信的目的 2. 批评该行为 3. 提出建议 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Editior, I am Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Senior 3. I?m writing to draw your attention to some important behavior among us students-many Senior Three studetns are busy packing up their used books to throw them away. I find it not a

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