have never run a marathon before, i have accompanied my uncle to attend this event for many times, so i am quite familiar with the running route and some common knowledge of it. Second, i possess the knowledge of first aid and and have greater patience with people. Once something happens, i will be able to give a helping hand to the medical team to reduce risk to largest extent.It?s always advisable to make full preparations for fear of unexpected accidents.As the job requires standing for a long time in the sunlight,waiting for every participate to pass by, patience is undoubtedly a must,which is fortunately my merit.
Last but not least, i have a strong and healthy body which enable me to stand the hot weather and the exhaust, keeping helping the participants until the marathon is over.
I really respect the participants not only for their dogged perseverance but also for their huge courage to sign up for marathon i wish one day i could take part in the event as well.But before that, i feel like serving as a volunteer to contribute my own effort so as to show my respect. Hope i will be your first choice.
Yours sincerely
Li Ping
范文4 Dear sir,
I?ve heard that the coming marathon race needs volunteers to help give water to athletes. I?m interested in it and I hope I could be offered this position.
I have to admit that I?m a huge fan of marathon. But since I?m not that suitable for such exhausting sport, I can?t enter the race myself. So I want to join the volunteer team in order to get close to such an exciting event. It would be a great experience if I were able to be chosen and to feel the heat of the race and the enthusiasm of the attendants.
Besides, I do have experiences in volunteering during a marathon. I did it several times in the past few years. I know how to give the water without disturbing the athletes. It?s always better to have an experienced one instead of several freshmen who are not sure when and where to give the water. I believe we will be in good cooperation. So please, consider my application and give me a chance to prove myself as an excellent volunteer. I?m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely
Li Ping
5.崇明区 明启中学计划在寒假的2018年2月5日至2018年2月18日（2018年2月16日为中国春节）期间组织一批学生到美国的结对学校Jenison Public School进行为期两周的交流学习，但具体的交流内容还在研讨之中。现学校要求想要参加的学生自行向负责该项目的王老师写申请书，并就交流的内容提出建议，然后再由学校商讨确定交流学生的名单。假设你是该校学生李敏，想要参加该项目，给王老师写申请书。你的申请书需包括：
? 想要参加该项目的愿望； ? 想要参加该项目的理由； ? 就交流内容提出具体建议。
注：文中不得提及你的真实姓名或学校。 Dear Mr.Wang
I?m Li Min. Hearing that you are planning to organize a group of students to Jenison Pubilc School, USA,
for academic exchange, I would really like to apply for this opportunity.
My parents and I have discussed the matter and they strongly approve of my participation in this activity,
which literally means I will miss the family reunion this Spring Festival. Since I have never experienced to go abroad for exchange study, I will surely benefit quite a lot by learning and communication in a different study atmosphere, let alone Jenison Pubilc School enjoying the longest history, the greatest reputation and the most
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experienced teaching mode. Problems such as communication barriers and cultural shock must be felt and ready to be solved during two weeks, so that American students and I can achieve mutual understandings in the field of culture and education.
What?s more, I have already work out a schedule to enrich this program for your further reference. A
special food plan is on the way for American students. They will be exposed to the wonderful Chinese Cuisine, enabling them to have a taste of a different food culture.
The most important of all, I have a wish to represent our students to enhance the Sino-US relationship.
And personally, I firmly believe that with such a determination, this program will improve my study interest, and cultivate a more mature and independent personality.
I sincerely hope you can give me this honor. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours, Li Min 6.长宁区 近年来，人工智能（Artificial Intelligence)发展迅速，人们日益关注AI对人类未来的影响。马云认为，人类创造出的机器，不可能超越人类。霍金（Stephen Hawking）则表示：“人工智能的完全发展可能预示着人类的终结”。你同意谁的观点，请说明理由。
范文1
With the fast-paced development of Artificial Intelligence, human-beings concerns about its influence are
also growing. While others are persuaded into Ma Yun?s believing that the machines created by human-beings can?t exceed human intelligence, I will always stick to my personal opinion that the sufficient development of Artificial Intelligence may cause the end of human-beings, the same as Stephen Hawking's perspective. Firstly, many people only have seen the AI?s benefits of chariting us a bold course to a more convenient and easy life, but they haven?t seen that the AI has robbed most workers? job, which led them to a miserable life of failing to support their families. Then it triggered a fresh argument that AI would replace us in every industry and people from all walks of life might lose their jobs , being short of income and even food. Secondly, I don't believe that we can always control the AI. The problem is that now we just have invented it but really haven't known about whether it has its own mind to think, while it actually knows what we are thinking about. If it is aware of its ability to damage us all by taking control of our life, we will be finished easily.
All in all, we can?t turn a blind eye to these concerns. There is not better choice than doing something to
change the previous situation so that we can spare people their anxiety and live with the help of AI conveniently.
范文2
With Artificial Intelligence developing rapidly in recent years, concerns over the influence of AI on our future life have ballooned. In Jack MA?s opinion, AI won't surpass human beings and dominant the world, while from Stephen Harking's point of view, the complete development of AI may lead to the end of human dominance. I approve of the latter opinion, although it sounds a little bit incredible.
First of all, AI, though created by humans, is superior to human beings in many fields. From the basic mechanical work, in which they are more precise than us, to those intelligence games, where AI pha Go gas beaten two of our world-class Go masters. These facts all indicate the gigantic potential of the development of AI, and thus, I believe it?s possible for AIs to surpass us in all respects.
What?s more, AIs may have the willing to outweigh human beings. In a study carried out by scientists, two AIs communicated with each other and eventually developed their own language. While they aren?t fully developed now, we must keep alert about instead of just chasing the profits.
Surely, I am not ignoring the benefits AIs have brought to our life or protesting against the development of AIs. Just remember that, a stitch in time saves nine, keeping alert from the beginning is always better from than making up for the mistakes AIs may probably make.
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7.松江区 目前，根据规定，上海高中生必须在三年内完成一项课题研究（Project Research）才能拿到高中毕业文凭。对此，大家意见不一。请谈谈你对此规定的看法，并陈述你理由。
作文范文1：
According to the newly released regulations, only when shanghai senior high students finish a project research in three years can they receive the great education diploma.
Many parents may hold the view that it's a waste of time doing so, thus having an adverse effect on students academic performances.However from my perspective, the benefitsoutweigh the drawbacks in terms of all-round development. My reasons are as follows. First and foremost, students tend to learn knowledge and skills from the text books so that they have no idea how to apply what they've learned to practice. Fortunately, the new reform offers them a platform where they can combine theory with practice, which is a good way to enhance their mental and physical development. Secondly, what students can acquire from the research is more than specific knowledge in one certain field.Only in this way can they get to know the significance of team spirits and something new about this amazing world.
Inconclusion, I strongly approve of this regulation in that students can have access to what they desire to learn and improve their all-round development to a large degree.
作文范文2：
Aside from academic achievements, Shanghai high school students are required to accomplish a Project Research in three years, otherwise, they cannot get the diploma for graduation. Although many thinkill of the requirement, I support it because shows an attempt to spark students? underlying qualities.
First, Project Research motivates students to think independently and to learn teamwork. Since Project Research covers all walks of life, students can select a social phenomenon or a specific science subject to study. Moreover, if students generate a research group, they can learn how to cope with cooperation.
Second, it fosters the spirit of exploring. Instead of just looking how it works, students are forced to do it on their own and explore their projects thoroughly to get a satisfying result.
Third, it equips them for universities or colleges. Contrary to the routine study of high school students, universities demand self-discipline and exploration. It?s childish to wait for teachers to tell you what book to read and what will be examined.
In brief, Project Research is an innovative approach to urge students to broaden their horizon and to escape from the heavy study burden.
作文范文3：
According to the rules，high school students in Shanghai are supposed to accomplish a project research within three years; otherwise they won?t get their high school diplomas.
There are several advantages in project research. The first advantage is that research activity can prepare students for university education. The second one is that research can train students? ways of thinking. However, the negative aspects of project research are also apparent. Students? time is limited and studying occupies most of their time. As a result, they don?t have enough time for a high-quality project research. They may copy from each other.
As to me, I think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. Nowadays, students can set aside no time for project research. Authorities had better have further discussions.
作文范文4：
According to a latest regulation, the diploma for senior High School can only be issued after the students
finishing a project research within 3 years. It divides criticizers: some applaud the requirement, while others are critical. As for me, I would like to join the latter group.
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Firstly, under the current teaching scheme, the students are required to learn up to 10 subjects, which has already served as a heavy burden for most students. Therefore, if the must is exerted indiscriminately, it will undoubtedly combine the pressure for those students.
What?s more, under the current education emphasizing various standards for judging the students? qualities, it?s better to select varied contents concerning the research, the students? results of which are open. Consequently, it is definitely unreasonable to simply relate the issuing of the diploma to whether the researches are finished.
In a word, the regulation not only exercises extra pressure to the students, but also proves to be against the present variety-encouraging education.
8.宝山区 某英文报正举办题为“A personal habit I?d like to change”的征文比赛。请你根据征文题目写一篇短文，参加该征文活动，具体要求如下： ①简述你想改变的这一行为习惯；
②说明你改变这一习惯的理由及措施 范文一：
A personal habit I?d like to change
Recently, I?ve always considered changing my personal habit, that is watching TV too long after school. From thelong-term point of view. I do think that I ought to take up reading rather than just watching soap operas on TV. My reasons are listed as follows：
In the first place, I don?t think the shows of every kind are really worth watching. In addition, I find that a majority of them TV offers to me can?t play an extraordinary role as the starting point of the voyages. Compared with TV, books can shape the world which is full of emotional, imaginative and historical, opening up a bridge which is linked to the real world. Moreover, as is known to all, setting too much time aside just for watching TV is a waste of time, especially I?m in the critical period of Senior Three. In the long term, it may have a bad effect on my academic studies when I lose myself in the world TV creates. Obviously, watching TV has much more disadvantages than advantages. So I shall spend more time in reading much more meaningful books and sparing no effort to study better.
At this level of analysis, it must be a wiser choice for me to change my personal habit-watching TV too long. To put it in a nutshell, I hope that I can succeed in highlighting something more meaningful instead of putting too much emphasis on the world TV creates for me which is comparatively skin-deep, compared with the treasure in books and happiness of study.
范文二：
A personal habit I?d like to change
It is the case that water is to fish what the phone is to me. With the development of electronic devices, the smart phone is so appealing that I can?t help but surf the internet on it before I go to bed.
However, this bad habit has made a difference to my study, which can be concluded from 2 aspects. Obviously, it shortens my sleep time greatly. As a result, my efficiency and passion for study are cut down owing to the tiredness and exhaustion. From another aspect, playing phone itself may distract my concentration from my academic study, which leads to my failure in the exams.
Accordingly, I have to spare no effort to get rid of this bad habit. As far as I?m concerned, it might be useful to turn off the phone before bed time. Consequently, there is no doubt that I will fall asleep soon and have a sound sleep, which are able to empower me to be full of energy next morning. But what I am supposed to focus on is the enhancement of my self-regulation. Only when I learn to manage my time well, can I really arrange my schedule in a proper way.
In conclusion, the personal habit I?d like to change does harm to both my health and my study, which I will make up my mind to remove.
范文三：
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A personal habit I?d like to change
It is roughly estimated that almost everyone has a unique habit, and so do I. My individual habit, taken up in my childhood, is biting my nails, which has a chronically negative effect on others? impression me.
Comparatively speaking, my own habit seems quite violent abusive when it comes to others, for sometimes I will use needles or something sharp to eliminate the tissues which are beyond my teeth?s touch. It is regular to a certain extent, for me to bleed or be infected due to this harmful habit.
However, the key factor causing me to change is that biting my mails is regarded as the behavior of lacking self-assurance. And for many times I have been told only after changing and kicking this awful habit can I become more self-confident and deserves trusting and respecting.
Consequently, I have made a determination to take immediate measures, to thoroughly abandon it. Considering the freezing temperature now, a pair of gloves are supposed to be greatly effective to hide my fingers, and some spicy sauces can be taken advantage of. Moreover, the resolution and persistence that is of great necessity in terms of the progress. Difficult and tough as it may be, I will spare no effort and stick to it so that I will ultimately achieve success and improve others? impression on me.
范文四
A personal habit Iwould like to change
I have a bad habit that I always put what I need to do today to the next day. The habit is so called “Procrastination”, and I have been bothered by it over the years.
It is often the case that students are high in their senior three. Ambitious as I am, I always plan my everyday task fully and elaborately without any extra time left. The result is Apparent: when I am faced with so many tasks at night, I lose the confidence and concentration, thus making a fail promise that I shall finish it later in the end.
It is crystal to me that doing every detail is significantly powerful to meet the final accomplishment. So I am trying every means to get rid of it. I will no longer make any ambitious but unrealistic plan. Indeed, I will list the things I need to do most and take sequence to finished them as planned.
To plus, I believe that making an appropriate plan is not enough, while a strong will is critical. So, I must be prepared to do whatever it takes to finish my plan.
A personal habit Iwould like to change
In terms of the habits I would like to change, it accessed to me that I would always make a perfect plan but leave everything until the last moment. So as far as I am concerned, I feel desperate to change the delaying habit.
It is widely recognized that time is the must precious thing throughout our life. To some extent, getting used to putting off the plan is a kind of wasting time. What?s more, finishing a supposed long-term task in a short hurry does no good to the quality of task itself. And therefore, I am eager to get rid of the unsatisfying habit as early as possible.
Only through reminding myself continuously can I be stimulated to engage in the mission. So I am figured out a couple of measures including writing on the sticky notes and carrying them wherever I go, setting clocks in my cell phones regularly, etc. I hold a film belief that if I could get rid of the bad habit, I would benefit more in the efficient and high quality studying.
9.奉贤区
请将要描述图片内容，并联系生活实际谈谈你的感想。 参考词汇：宝马（BMW）; 奔驰（Benz）
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2018年高三一模作文汇编
1.黄浦区 2017年已接近尾声，还记得年初你为自己定下的小目标吗？不知你是否实现了你的小目标？发一个微信朋友圈来回顾一下吧（文中请不要出现真实的校名人名）。你的朋友圈文字内容需包括： 1. 你的2017年度小目标；
2. 你为实现年度小目标所作的努力；
3. 你实现（或没有实现）年度小目标的经验总结。 范文：
My new year?s resolution for 2017 was that I should be able to communicate with foreign people in English. To achieve this goal, I had asked my English teacher for help. According to her suggestions, I made up a plan.
Firstly, I started with simply reading English articles and found many pronunciation errors in my reading after listening to the video tape of its recording. Then, I tried to learn phonetics and practice one syllable after another again and again. I started with a single word, then a phrase, a sentence, a paragraph and finally the whole passage. After 3-month practice, I was able to read an article fluently without making any mistakes in pronunciation. I felt happy. Next, I practiced my listening. By listening to a passage four times, I required myself to take it down without spelling errors or any information blank. Last but not least, I installed an app called Shanbei Oral English on my phone to practice both my listening and speaking. It?s like having conversations with a robot. I had to understand what it said to me and answer its questions accordingly. After practicing for almost 8 months, I had my first talking session with an American teacher in our school. I was proud of myself.
What I have learntfrom this experience is something as a saying goes: no pain no gain. Though the process of learning could be dull and tiring, it?s worth all the efforts after I achieved my goal. Even if I didn?t, it?s still a valuable part of my life.
阅卷作文 8+8+4=20
The wonderful year of 2017 is drawing to an end. I remember that I set an annual goal to keep fit at the beginning of 2017, since staying healthy is crucial to ensuring my study, thus better prepare myself for Gaokao.
To achieve my goal of keeping fit, here are some efforts I?ve taken throughout the year. On the very first day of 2017, I downloaded a fitness app called Keep. Following the fitness instructions the app offered, I exercised every other night before I go to bed. Also, I did some research into the daily nutrition I need in order to stay healthy both physically and mentally, after which I devised a moderate dieting plan. Apart from the above, I?ve invited family members and friends to join me so that we can encourage each other and exchange fitness experience.
So far, the record shown on my fitness app shows that I?ve done well this year, reaching a record high of 200 training times in total. Although at times I felt like giving up because of too much study pressure and limited time, I?m glad I have stuck to my plan. It seems to me that anything is possible if I throw in all of my energy and passion, and most of all, perseverance. Some rules apply to study. So I hope I will keep such passion and strength to do my best in the coming 2018.（237 words） 点评：
1． 文本结构段落清晰，符合作文题目要求。
1） 第一段明确告知自己的年度小目标是什么；
2） 第二段有总起句，段落中有清晰的标记词 (如also, apart from) 告知读者自己所做的努力，且努力
的行为都非常具体。
3） 第三段对经验的总结可以再和第二段的三个努力匹配些，a. 借助科技的力量(app)；b. 借助科学的
力量（did research into the daily nutrition）; c. 组团抗击惰性。
2．在语言表达能力比较强的基础上，可以考虑文字的进一步精炼。是否有“废话”？字数建议不超过200（此学生语言能力强，中等学生160左右即可）。精练而准确的表达也是思维和表达功力的体现。
7+8+4=19
Greeting from the end of 2017! It?s now the time to conclude our yearly goals again. On the new year?s eve, I set up two goals for the year: to getter better grades and to lose weight and I?m proud to announce that I?ve accomplished the first one.
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To realize the goals, much effort has been put in throughout the year. First of all, I changed my attitudes towards various subjects. I?ve spent more time on them, as you might already know, and try to find my own strength and weaknesses and strived hard to overcome my weak points. In addition, I?ve found my own pace of studying, which I regard as the most precious reward of this year?s effort. Secondly, I began to take a more active part in sports this year. I took every opportunity I have to exercise, and take sports lessons at a gym near my apartment. Though I haven?t lose much weight, I feel myself much healthier than ever before.
To conclude how I?ve made these progress, here comes my years motto: no pains, no gains. No matter how hard it might be, stick to the goal and never quit, and never dream of shortcuts to success. So if you want to achieve something, just try hard, no matter what the result might be, you?re surely going to benefit from the process. Good luck everyone, and I wish you a happy, successful new year in 2018! (241 words) 点评：
1， 有读者意识，明确知晓是在朋友圈发的年度总结，所以开头结尾很应景。 2， 段落结构总体比较清晰，符合作文题目要求。
1） 第一段告知了自己的两个年度目标。
2） 第二段中有总体句、标记词（如：first of all, in addition），方便读者阅读。但总体表达都比较含
糊，建议可以更加清晰化具体化（改变的行为不具体是因为目标不具体导致的）；特别是第二点，如果学生把目标定位，今年我要参加多少节健身课，或者我要完成多少公里的跑步，那么行为可以更具体，对是否可以达到自己年度目标的检测也可以更明确。
3） 第三段的经验总结与之前努力的匹配度不高。如果要写no pains, no gains，那么第二段里应该有
具体的自己在遭遇瓶颈或者难以坚持的时候是如何咬牙坚持下来的。 4） Good luck建议可以另起一段。 3， 文本字数偏长。
7+6+3=16
At the beginning of this year, I have made up my mind to achieve a goal. That was I hoped that I could lose my weight. With the passing by, I have achieved my goal. The following are some of my conclusion of this objective.
To reach my objective, I worked out a series of plans. To begin with, I designed a healthy diet menu, which excluded unhealthy foods that I was fond of before. That?s the basic of losing weight. Secondly, I went to park or sporting places regularly to do various sports. As we all know, the more exercise you do, the more heats you will consume. Last but not least, I took an active part in every kinds of school activity which can not only help me lose weight but also enrich my life.
From this experience, I conclude that once you have a goal, you should stick to every hardship so that you may reach the mountain top. The process may be full of difficulties and you are likely want to give up. Go ahead, and then you will find there is nothing can hit down you. (191 words) 点评：
1， 段落结构比较清晰，符合作文题目要求。
2， 第二段中的标记词（to begin with, secondly, last but not least）不恰当。第三个努力的行为（I took an
active part in every kinds of school activity which can not only help me lose weight but also enrich my life.）的内容不恰当，部分与主题无关（如：enrich my life）。
3， 第三段的总结too general，基本与第二段的努力行为没有关系。根据第二段的内容，经验应该是：管
住嘴，迈开腿。
4， 字数偏多，建议160左右。
5+6+2=13
At the end of 2017, I can?t help thinking the aim what I have set about making a great profess in math before the 2017 come.
Math is a terrible for me to study well. To study math well, as I firmly believe, only by practicing more, can I gain a good mark. In order to realize this aim, I get up earlier everyday so that I can have more time to do the math exercise. I ask teacher many questions about the math. My mother always encourage me to study math when it comes to the problem of math. I always feel nervous, because I think it is very difficult for me to study math well. But being encouraged by the parents and teacher I have confidence. Finally, I realized it.
I want to share my experience to the students which have the same problem as me. Practice makes perfect. If we want gain a good mark we should practice more. （162 words）
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点评：
1， 涵盖了作文题目要求的三个部分。
2， 第二段的内容需要重新梳理，做了三个努力：a.每天早起做数学题目；b. 有问题勤问老师；c.心理焦
虑时向妈妈倾诉（要说我做了什么，而不是文中My mother always encourage me to study math when it comes to the problem of math.）。
3， 由此，第三段的经验总结是：a. practice makes perfect；b. 多向他人求助
4+4+1=9
The year of 2017 will be over. I always think it is a year with my ambition. I still rember the day which is the first of 2017. On that day IpraiedI could get higher scores in the test. I made my plan to get close to the top of the rank.
For the sake of good marks, what I must have is a serious attitude. It was the most important things for me to insist the plan. I decided to read books of English. It was the most difficult subject for me. I recited the words and vocabulary day by day. And the reading is an another problem. Because of the lack of vocabularyIcouldn't understand the passage clearly. I started reading the English lessons in every morning. That?s good day for me that I could never forget.
Although I still not get my plan, I still want to get higher score in next exam. It was my ambition, I believe I can do it next year. Even though the life is tough to me. (179 words)
点评：
1， 结构性缺失，没有“经验总结”。
2， 第二段的内容需要重新梳理。a. 每天背多少单词；b. 每天早晨读多少时间英语；c. 每周（或每两周或
每个月）读1本英语书。
2.普陀区 学校图书馆优美的学习环境和丰富的文献资源为学生们综合素质的提升提供了良好的平台。为了进一步提高图书馆的服务水平，图书馆现向学生们征集建议。假如你是李华，写信给图书馆负责人对图书馆的现状进行分析，并就此提出一些实用性的改进建议。 Dear Sir,
In response to your collecting suggestions to further improve our school library?s service quality, I am writing to put forward my humble advice, hoping to be of some value.
Our school library, with beautiful environment and a wide range of books and reference materials, serves as a golden platform to promote students? overall ability. However, there are still some problems remaining unsolved. The available seats are always tight, some vacant ones are occupied by students with their personal stuff and to make things even worse, some of them do not appear in the library at all. Besides, sometimes it is noisy because the discussion area is not separated, which makes students while learning hard to concentrate. Also, the network in our lab doesn?t work well that it?s not easy to have access to it when we are collecting information online.
For the above situation, I suggest an exclusive room should be appointed as a meeting room where students are allowed to discuss. Moreover, rules should be made about the usage of the seats that if one person leaves his seat over 20 minutes, the seat can be available to others. And if possible, put some fund to update our existing network. I would be so glad if my advice is adopted. I appreciate your devotion to the construction of our library and may our library be better and better.
Sincerely yours
Li Hua
3.徐汇区 俗话说“万事开头难”（All things are difficult before they are easy.）。你是否同意这一说
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法？请用英语写一篇短文，内容包括： 1. 你对这句俗语的理解；
2. 结合生活中一个具体事例加以说明。 注意：请勿透露本人真实姓名和学校名称。
范文1
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As an old saying goes,“All things are difficult before they are easy.”The widespread notion reveals the truth that we are likely to encounter setbacks when we start to do something but if we face them with perseverance and determination, we will find the rest of the work easier.
Personally,I am strongly in favour of the proverb and my own experience can well serve as case in point.When I was a Senior One student, I made up my mind to set up a science fiction community in our school.I thought it would be a piece of cake, but the first few weeks following my decision turned out tough. To my disappointment, few students showed interest in the community. Filled with the bitterness of failure, I was almost going to give up but the bottom of my heart urged me to keep calm and go on.After weeks of struggle and every possible means tried, I managed to find several members and once we started to hold activities, more students became interested and joined our community.
What can be learnt from my experience is that perseverance carries true weight in our pursuit of success. Life is never like those fairy tales and we in reality all tend to meet frustrations and setbacks in our lives. Tricky as the situation might seem in the beginning,we must always bear in mind that“Every cloud has a silver lining” and our efforts won?t go in vain. Nevertheless, if we give up halfway, chances are that we?ll never see the easiness following the difficulties and he who is easily beaten to the ground by hardship is certain to end up achieve nothing.
To sum up, the saying “All things are difficult before they are easy” us a perfect reminder that things all seem tough at the beginning. Faced with difficulties, we should cheer up and work with perseverance. Thus, success is bound to be within arm?s reach. (9+ 9 + 2) (334 words)
范文2
It is said that: all things are difficult before they?re easy”, I couldn?t agree with it more. Life is no plain sailing, nothing can be achieved with ease unless you have the quality of devotion and perseverance.
Once I went fishing with my father. Initially, I was very excited and full of confidence, figuring ?Fishing, how hard can it be? You just sit there and wait for the fish to bite. It?s a piece of cake.? However, as you can guess, I had sat there for almost one hour, yet I got nothing. Soon I was distraught and impatient. Just when I was about to quit, my father turned around and said, “Be focused and wait.” Having nothing else to do, I did what he said. I calmed myself down and re-concentrated on the pole. Two hours later, I gained my reward.
The experience has indeed taught me something. That is all things are difficult before they?re easy. As long as you devote yourself and hang on, you?ll succeed.
范文3
The old saying goes like “all things are difficult before they are easy,” which suggests that the hardest time one needs go through is the beginning of a task.
As for me, I simply hold the opposite opinion. Personally. I believe that it?s always easy to make a resolution but hard to carry it out strictly. Because of the common passion at the beginning, efforts are willingly made. Nevertheless, it is perseverance that is needed to complete it.
The topic naturally reminds me of the days when I struggled for physical examination, in which I need to get a high score to be addicted to my dreaming high school. I make up my mind firmly three months before the exam that I would go jogging every night and kept on doing so for one month. When the initial passion faded and the tiredness stroke me every evening. I was so eager to take a breath from the exhausted training and almost gave up the plan. It was the strong-will power that kept me going on.
This unforgettable experience taught me the importance of perseverance, which confirms me that things are especially difficult in the middle stage.
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As the famous saying goes “All things are different before they are easy.” From my perspective, the proverb means that we?re all inexperienced and might meet numerous frustrations before handling the task well. There is no exception that we have to go through a certain period to familiarize ourselves with the practice, during which the perspective is most required.
Take myself as an example, once I was assigned to deliver a speech on my English learning method. Never had I got such experience before, I was totally overwhelmed by the task. Despite the shyness and lack in confidence, I know it clear that the capability of expressing oneself to the public is of great importance in future work. Therefore, I started to practice trying to keep off nervousness. I looked out for videos on TED to music, the gesture of speakers and spoke aloud before my parents. Thanks to these hardships,I managed to give a satisfying speech.
One must be equipped with endurance and faithfulness during the course of exploration. Few of us are born to be genius.
4.杨浦区 马拉松(marathon)比赛需要志愿者发放矿泉水，学校校庆需要招募引导员。请你从中选取一个感兴趣的志愿者岗位，写信给负责老师完成报名，并在信中具体谈谈你的理由。 范文1 Dear sir,
Hearing that the marathon match and school celebration need a lot of volunteers and guides, I think I am qualified for the position of guides and it will be my great honor to do the job, so I write to you to enter for the guide.
First, I have a great sense of direction, which enables me to lead actors and actress to arrive at their positions without difficulties. It?s very essential when the back of stage is crowded with people and different kinds of decorations and all the performers are hurrying to dress them up and get their needed things ready.
Second, I have the experience of being a guide before and I knew how to deal with unexpected accidents and mistakes. Such experience is helpful to calm myself down to arrange things in order. Besides, I am familiar with my schoolmates an d have great abilities to communicate with them, which makes it possible for me to find the right person and talk to them to relieve their nerve for the performance.
According to all the abilities above, I think I?m suitable for the position and I really hope that you can give me a chance to use my power to add a touch to our School Celebration. Thank you for reading my letter.
Yours sincerely
Li Ping
范文2 Dear Sir,
I?ve learnt that our school is recruiting guides for the celebration of school anniversary and I?m writing to give a self-recommendation.
First of all, an acute sense of direction and my familiarity with all the locations on campus put me an advantage. Considering that some of our alumnus may take a long and tiresome journey to attend our celebration, I am sure that my air of delight will sweep them off tiredness in no time . Besides, informing them of the change in recent years and sharing anecdotes about the school can remind them of their precious memories here so that they will no longer be shrouded in a sense of unfamiliarity. Furthermore, it is my outstanding communication skills and ability to articulate that distinguish me. I wouldn?t forget to leave them private space for nostalgia after fulfilling my obligations.
I would be greatly obliged if you would allow me this golden opportunity to enhance my social skills and to contribute to the as a volunteer.
Yours sincerely
Li Ping
范文3 Dear Sir,
I am writing to apply for the volunteer who gives mineral water to marathon runners. Why i think am qualified for this position can be concluded in the following three aspects.
First and foremost, i am an experienced choice both in marathon and in the work of volunteering. Although i
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As is depicted in the picture, with a strong and distorted comparison psychology, 2 students are showing off their parents' wealth and statues to enhance and exhibit his worth. Compared with a girl sitting on her father's humble bike, they seem to go towards parents' privilege competition instead of erecting decent life values and outlook.
In modern times, \and frequent reports online have always reminded us that this phenomenon is all around us. They believe the children of rich families, known as the \rich generation,\can always get decent jobs and social status ahead of the poor. And children from poor families think traits like hard-work, creativity and sound academic achievements can never beat having a “good father”. However, “Fight father game\teaching us to be dependent on ourselves to create a colorful feature. Emphasis should be put on one's capacity rather than background, and adults have the responsibility to help teenagers build up the correct values and views on life. So as for students like us, we should have a good attitude towards family background. Facing with millionaires, keep eyesight horizontal; facing with poverty, keep heads up and never give up. Besides, we should make full preparation, though a solid foundation of wealth will help us overcome difficulties, it is not for person who has no preparation. So an old proverb says that the sweetest fruit is one that has cultivated by hand.
10.闵行区 假设你是学生李华，你校正在下学期开设的选修课程征求学生意见，请你向学校课程部老师写一封 email, 提出你的课程建议。你的email 中必须包括： 1. 课程名称 2. 课程的主要内容
3. 设置该课程的理由
Dear teacher,
It?s really a surprise to learn that our school is seeking suggestions from us students about the course to be developed next semester. The proposals I put forward are as follows:
As far as I?m concerned, most classmates really expect to have a course named Selected Reading from British and American Newspaper．The content of this course can be separated into three parts: current affairs, exotic culture and practical techniques in daily life. There are four reasons accounting for my preference.
Firstly, we will be informed of the latest affairs that is happening in the world very well, through which we can keep pace with the changing times. Secondly, we will learn a variety of culture and customs, which can help to broaden our horizons and enrich our knowledge. Thirdly, we will learn to work out the practical problems in daily life on our own, becoming independent of our parents. In addition, we can enlarge our vocabulary and improve our capacity of reading comprehension by having access to considerable articles written by native speakers.
There is no denying that we will benefit a lot from the new course we can take next term. We would appreciate it very much if our humble suggestions can receive your favorable consideration.
Yours sincerely
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Li Hua
11.浦东新区 近年来，随着科技的迅猛发展，身边的新事物取代旧事物的事例层出不穷，请你简要描述一个具体实例，并说明这一新事物存在的理由。 Sample1
In the past few decades, with the rapid development of modern technology, we have stepped into the digital age. As the population of Internet users， which are called online residents, is going larger, emails are likely to be taking the place of traditional letters.
On one hand, email enables people to deliver their messages more easily and convenient, as well as lowering the expense. People no longer need to go to a post office to send letters, which saves time for issues of more importance.
On the other hand, email narrows the gap between people living in different areas, or even in different countries. Contacts can be more efficient, thanks to the international networks, whereas email can be received instantly.
Convenient as it is, there are still some problems caused by email remain to be solved. Personal privacy, for example, can be threatened by hackers. Generally speaking, however, we can't deny that the emerge of email does more benefit than harm.
Sample 2
With the rapid development and popularity of Internet, many physical stores are being replaced by the online shopping. Although the majority of shop keepers criticize the Internet commerce as a fatal killer, from my point of view, the existing of it must have some dramatic advantages.
For one thing, it goes without saying that the online online shopping brings so much convenience. Compared with going to a far place, and caring a mass of things, so comfortable is it that we can conduct shopping with a click of mouse.
For another, there is no denying that shopping online can avoid embarrassment. Internet provides you with a private room. No doubts that you won't be showed when purchasing bargains anymore.
All in all, the advanced online market is a sign of the country's progress. We ought to regard it as a means of modern life. Only by improving the transportation and electronic devices can our online shopping have a better future.
12. 静安区 你是李华，临近寒假，你的好朋友刘伟写信像你咨询他的寒假计划，目前有三个备选方案：①去美国某高中参加冬令营（winter camp）;②应征某历史博物馆临时讲解员（docent）;③提前学习下学期高中课程。请给刘伟写回信，谈谈你的看法。信中必须包括：
1. 你建议的方案； 2. 你如此建议的理由； 3. 你对于执行此方案的建议。 参考范文： Dear Liu
I?m truly delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on your plan on winter vacation. It?s no
wonder that all the three plans are not only meaningful but also helpful to you. However, as far as I am concerned,
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among the plans, being a temporary docent in the museum would be the best choice for you. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, it?s about the time issue. Since it?s winter vacation, the time is limited compared with
summer vacation, and as the most important festival—Spring Festival is also in the vacation, we shouldn?t leave far away from home. Therefore, attractive and meaningful as it is, going to America to attend a winter camp might not be a wise choice. For learning the next-term course in advance, though, to some extent, it is useful. But for you, it is not essential and necessary since you are already an A-grade student. I don?t doubt you can also achieve a good academic performance without learning it ahead of time. As a result, being a temporary docent in the museum is undoubtedly becoming the first choice. I believe you can learn a lot in the program. For to be a qualified docent, you must know a lot about what you need to explain to the visitors, which provides a good chance for you to learn. Meanwhile, you can also polish your communication skills in the process of introducing things to others.
So great the opportunity is that you must take actions to seize it. In order to achieve it, I suggest you learn
more about the museum by searching information online first. Secondly, you?d better choose one aspect that not only you are familiar with but also is related to the museum to study more. Last but not least, prepare well for the interview in advance.
Please take good consideration of my advice.I hope you will find these ideas useful.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
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你应邀在英语课上的“每日一谈”环节中发表自己对《中国诗词大会》（The Chinese Poetry Competition)、《国家宝藏》(National Treasure)等以传统文化为主题的电视节目热播现象的看法。
你的发言稿必须包括： ?简单介绍一个此类节目； ?分析此类节目热播的原因。
(注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。文章的开头已为你写好。） 作文范文：
Apparently, such kind of TV programs definitely need our praise for they help us better appreciate the beauty of Chinese culture.
The Chinese poetry competition, is a vivid example of how technology and traditional cultural, once combined together, can create a national trend. It features competitions among high school students to help them truly understand the value of traditional poems instead of memorizing them for exams.
So, you might wonder why these shows can enjoy such a great popularity. Personally, I find the reason quite simple. First, I am convinced that it is the charm of traditional Chinese culture itself that draws us to these shows like a magnet. Traditional culture, like poems, provides us with a glimpse of what life was like before. It seems as
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if an invisible bridge leading to Chinese culture was then built by these shows. For example, Every time I read a poem, I feel myself identifying with the writer, feeling what he felt, though there might be thousands of years apart between us.
Secondly, the increasing awareness on culture identity is another reason. Cultural identity, I assume is what binds us together as a whole. Imagine if Beijing lost Great wall, what it would be like. Maybe it will become nothing but another New York or Tokyo. Through exploring traditional culture, we deepen our recognition of who we are, what we belong to as a family.
So, from the reasons mentioned above, I call on everyone to support these programs as well as try our best to preserve our traditional culture from now in case it becomes a thing of past. If not now, then when. If not us, who?
14.虹口区 假如你是李华，你的美国朋友（Stephen）来信说，要在圣诞节期间来沪旅游。他在网上选中了三个景点：外滩、豫园和东方明珠。他来信征求你的意见。请你根据自身经验，建议他舍弃其中的一个景点（要说明放弃理由）；并推荐一个新的景点供他参考（说明推荐理由）。
注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级等真实信息。 第一篇
Dear Stephen,
On hearing that you are planning to visit Shanghai during your Christmas holiday, I?d like to give you some advice based on my experience.
There are two aspects accounting for my advice. Initially, the visit to the Oriental Pearl TV Tower in your original plan isn?t my optimal action. As this scenic spot is out of fashion, and you will waste a lot of time queuing outside, its ordinary and less attractive tour items aren?t worth your wait.
What?s more, I strongly suggest that you should pay a visit to Shanghai Museum. The reasons are as follows. On one side, standing in the center of Shanghai, Shanghai Museum is easy to get by various means of public transportation. On the other side, huge amounts of precious ancient exhibits are displayed in it, presenting the high profession and high fame of Shanghai Museum. Only by visiting it can you get a general idea of Shanghai, which contains both modern facilities and ancient culture.
Therefore, I?d appreciate it very much if you would accept my suggestion.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
第二篇
Dear Stephen:
Nothing can exceed my joy of hearing you will travel to Shanghai during the Christmas. I am firmly convinced that you shouldn't go to the Oriental Pearl TV Tower. And I really suggest you going to the Shanghai Centre.
There are three reasons as follows can account for my decision. First and foremost,the Oriental Pearl TV Tower is crowed with people every day and it is quiet out of date. For another, it's not the most famous place in Shanghai. Last but not least, the Oriental Pearl TV Tower is not worth visiting because it's ticket is quiet expensive and you may can't see the view as your expectation.
I really suggest you going to the Shanghai Centre is because it's the new landmark in Shanghai.And it's the tallest building in Shanghai. You can have a bird eye view when you at the Shanghai Centre.
I was very happy that you will come. And I hope my suggestion will help you.I hope that you will have a most happy time during the travel.
Sincerely yours, Li Hua
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第三篇
Dear Stephen:
I'm glad to hear from you that you will come to visit Shanghai during the Christmas. And as for your options, my suggestions are as follows.
Primarily, as a native in Shanghai, there are plenty of sceneries and you will certainly enjoy your trip. I have already seen the these spotlights you had chosen and I don't really recommend the Yu Garden since you have visited the Bund and the Oriental Pearl TV Tower as your destinations. On one hand, the TV Tower is approximately opposite to the Bund as you can both see them by taking a ferry over the Huangpu River rather than wasting quantities of time to go to Yu Garden. On the other hand the Yu Garden is not as occupied as the Bund is, thus, I recommend the 1933 Old Factory. It is also near from the former two spots and can fill your imagination of the Chinese history. In other word, the active atmosphere everywhere will arouse your pleasure of the holiday.
In a nutshell, I will greatly appreciate it if you could take my advice.
Sincerely yours, Li Hua
第四篇
Dear Stephen,
I?m happy to hear from your letter. As we said, it?s a good choice to travel in Shanghai during Christmas holiday. If give me three options to choose, my opinion is give up the Yu Garden. My reason is following: even if you will go to Shanghai in Christmas, I think the Bund and Oriental Pearl TV Tower are more suitable to the atmosphere of Christmas. Yu Garden is a traditional ancient scenic spot. To my experience, apart from the Bund and Oriental Pearl TV Tower, I also suggest Nanjing Road. Because it?s Shanghai?s famous label, you can go shopping there. What?s more, in Christmas, Nanjing Road will hold many sales about Christmas. You also can enjoy the night show everywhere.
To sum up, I?m looking forward to your wonderful visit in Shanghai, and hope you to take my advice into account. See you in Christmas Day!
Sincerely yours, Li Hua 教师版：
Dear Stephen,
I?m so excited to know that you are going to visit Shanghai during Christmas. For the three tourist attractions—the Bund, Yu Garden and the Oriental Pearl Tower, I?d like to recommend you to visit the former two and add Shanghai Xintiandi as another destination.
My suggestion to cut out the Oriental Pearl Towerfrom the list are based on the following reasons. As you are afraid of heights and feel dizzy in a high-rise elevator, it is not suitable for you to visit the 468-meter-high building. What?s more, the viewing platform in the Oriental Pearl Tower is made of glass, which makes frightening to look down.
The reason why I suggest you visit Shanghai Xintiandi is that it is the fashionable landmark of Shanghai, full of bars and cafes. At the meantime, you can enjoy the traditional buildings of Shanghai. The good combination of tradition and modern cultures is sure to appeal to you.
I hope you will take my advice into consideration and I?m looking forward to meeting you in Shanghai.
Yours Li Hua
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内容须包含：
1. 简要描述图片内容；
2. 简要分析父母陪伴孩子的时间越来越少的原因；
3. 结合自己的经历，谈谈父母多陪伴孩子对其孩子的影响。
As is vividly described in the picture, 54% of parents devote less than 3 hours to playing with their children. Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that an increasing number of parents spend less time accompanying their families. There are several reasons accounting for the phenomenon.
To begin with, with the development of the intellectual economy, faced with the fierce competition among colleagues, parents have to take some courses for further study and acquire more qualifications during their weekends and holidays so as to be promoted and raise salaries. Furthermore, due to the popularity of electronic products, some parents are addicted to smart-phones or computers in their spare time instead of keeping their children company. Eventually, some parents have part-time jobs after work to support the family due to the high expenses, such as tutoring, Wechat business or waiters and so on.
As far as I am concerned, my parents were very busy with work and earned a living during my childhood. Thus, I became independent of them but felt lonely. So eager was I to draw their attention and love at the bottom of my heart. In terms of my experience, I strongly recommend that parents should commit more time to accompanying their children however busy they are.Not only can it have a positive on shaping their personality but also is beneficial to their mental and physical health. Nothing is more important than parents? love.
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内容须包含：
1. 简要描述图片内容；
2. 简要分析父母陪伴孩子的时间越来越少的原因；
3. 结合自己的经历，谈谈父母多陪伴孩子对其孩子的影响。
As is vividly described in the picture, 54% of parents devote less than 3 hours to playing with their children. Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that an increasing number of parents spend less time accompanying their families. There are several reasons accounting for the phenomenon.
To begin with, with the development of the intellectual economy, faced with the fierce competition among colleagues, parents have to take some courses for further study and acquire more qualifications during their weekends and holidays so as to be promoted and raise salaries. Furthermore, due to the popularity of electronic products, some parents are addicted to smart-phones or computers in their spare time instead of keeping their children company. Eventually, some parents have part-time jobs after work to support the family due to the high expenses, such as tutoring, Wechat business or waiters and so on.
As far as I am concerned, my parents were very busy with work and earned a living during my childhood. Thus, I became independent of them but felt lonely. So eager was I to draw their attention and love at the bottom of my heart. In terms of my experience, I strongly recommend that parents should commit more time to accompanying their children however busy they are.Not only can it have a positive on shaping their personality but also is beneficial to their mental and physical health. Nothing is more important than parents? love.
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