英语专转本教案 - 写作(3)

(2) easy to be informed (3)stable jobs

(4) enough supply of goods

(5) many places for recreation and relaxation 第二段:(1) air pollution (2) crowded in the street

(3) not hospitable among the people (4) quick pace of living

第三段: my perference owing to daily conceniences （三）起草成文

Many peole appreciate the convenience of the city. People can enjoy colorful life there. They are easy to be informed because they have the access to news. They are well-paid because they have stable jobs. They are well-fed and well-dressed because there are adequate of goods. They often have a wonderful time because there are many places for them to spend the long and tedious nights.

However, living in the city have also some disadvantages. Air pollution is very serious in the city. Nowhere people can find a clear river and enjoy the fresh air. Moreover, it is so crowded in the street that many people don?t want to go out. Besides, the pace of living in the city is not gentle so that the people there have little chance to talke to each other.

I prefer to live in the city owing to its daily conveniences. （四）修改润色

Many people appreciate the conceniences of the life in the city. People can enjoy colorful life there. They are

well-in-formed because they have the access to news. They are well-paid because they have stable jobs. They are well-fed and well-dressed because there is an adequate supply of goods. They often have a wonderful time because there are many places to kill the long and tedious nights.

However, living in the city has some disadvantages. Pollution is very serious in the city. Nowhere can people find a clear stream or take the fresh air. Moreover, it is so crowded in the street that many people don?t want to go out. Besides, the pace of living in the city is not gentle. As a result, people there have little chance to talke to each other.

Considering its daily conveniences, I prefer to live in the city.

四、短文中的过度词

1、用于段落开头的过渡词 Generally speaking

It goes without saying that… There is no doubt that….

As is known to all…. As the proverb says…. As the saying goes….. It is true that….. Now / Presently …. Recently / Lately …..

e.g.1) There is no doubt that different books give different kinds of knowledge. Some are good and others are bad…..

2) As the saying goes, caution is the parent of safety. 2、用于段落结尾的过渡词

In summary / to sum up / in conclusion In short / in brief

On the whole / all in all

As has been noted / as I have said In my opinion Therefore / thus Eventually

From this point of view

e.g.1)In conclusion, a good teacher-student relationship can be mutually beneficial. The student gains knowledge eagerly and enjoyable, and the teacher gains satisfaction from this job.

2)As I have said, country life is more beneficial than city life.

3、其它重要的过渡词

举例：for example, such as….. 比较：similarly, the same as….. 对照：on the contrary, otherwise….. 让步：although, yet, however ….. 原因：because, due to …..

结果：therefore, as a result of….. 强调：especially, surely…… 列举：first，second, finally….. 五、常见的错误

1、主语和谓语不一致

One tend to think he is better than others. 2、代词和先行词不一致

The lecturer leaves time for the audience to ask them

questions

3、非谓语动词与主句的主语不一致 Listening intently, a noise was heard. 4、时态、人称和数的不一致

Those who are imprisoned find it hard to find a job after they have been released.

College graduates take a good position, a handsome salary and a satisfactory working condition when they chose a job.

Whether one enjoys or resents TV commercials, we are actually bombarded with it every time when people turn on their TV.

Many students want to get a very good job that can bring someone much money and reputation. 5、断句方面

TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.

There are many ways to improve city traffic. For example, widening streets, building subways and so on. Nuclear power has some distinct advantages. Such as it is clean and cheap. 6、连词方面

The air in the countryside is fresh, many people like to live there.

A graduate wants to be employed, he must have a successful job interview first. 7、搭配方面

Nowdays , the traffic in big cities is getting more and more crowed.

For some students, the tuition fees are so expensive

that they can?t afford them. 8、误用方面

first adv. (首先) at first adv. (起初,最开始) every day n. (每天) everyday adj. (每一天) effect n. (结果) effect vt. (影响,外在的) influence vt./n. (影响,外在)

economic adj. (经济的) economical adj. (经济实惠)的 continuous adj.(连续的) continual adj. (时断时续的) 9、汉语项目英语化方面

After the military training for several months, our bodies become very healthy.

In university, we must spend bitter work to master knowledge.

Some girl students in our class don?t study well. All day they talk love.

Because with the quick development in coastal areas, the inlanders find that they should try their best to catch up.

If without the co-operation of the whole society, Project Hope would not have been so successful.

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