2014考研英语小作文常考题型及写作模板（整理自跨考）(6)

Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address. To Whom It May Concern,

I am a student in this university who regularly comes to the library to spend my spare time. Generally speaking, the services you offer here are quite good; however, I have some suggestions for you to adopt. And I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration.

To begin with, will you please prolong the time for reading? In the daytime, most of the students are having classes, so they can’t come to the library. Moreover, some of the books on shelves are out of date. If you are so kind as to provide us some books such as the latest magazines, we will be very pleased.

I really wish to have a more comfortable library. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours sincerely, Li Ming C.建议信框架

Dear XX/To Whom It May Concern,

I am xxx who?. Generally speaking, the services you offer here are quite good; however, I have some suggestions for you to adopt. To begin with,?建议一; Moreover, ?建议二。

Thank you for your time and consideration. And I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 建议信常用套语有：

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提出问题：It seems that ? (not have desired effects, not have obtained the full attention; be not satisfactory/ perfect; have harmful / deadly/ serious/negative effects)

I am ?(deeply/ really/ seriously/ terribly/greatly) concerned / worried / sad / confused about?

分析原因：Currently, ? especially ? ;Therefore,? ;This leads to?; one of the factors is ?;

It is understood that if?it will?.

提出解决方法：In order to combat the growing problem of? , ? should reduce/ increase / ensure?; I think it would be more beneficial if you could?.; I think it would be helpful to?.

十五、介绍信

介绍信是社交书信中较常用的，一般是向收信人介绍第三者并希望得到他的支持、帮助或者照顾。根据介绍人、被介绍人与收信人之间的关系以及介绍的目的，可以分为普通社交介绍信和公务介绍信两种。公务介绍信往往比较正式，有一定的规律可循。

介绍信一般都包括：第一部分详细叙述被介绍人的情况，如姓名、年龄、学历等;第二部分说明情由，即被介绍人此行的目的;第三部分写明被介绍人希望得到哪方面的帮助并向收信人致谢。

写作“三步曲”：

说明被介绍人的身份→提出希望收信人做的事情→像收信人表示感谢或者表示希望能合作愉快。 注意：

语言上介绍信应措辞礼貌得体，对被介绍人的说明应简洁明了、重点突出。 范文解析：

Directions: Your close friend in college, Li Ming, is going to pursue his postgraduate study in the foreign university where you studied before。

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Write a letter of no less than 100 words to your former teacher Professor Smith to introduce Li Ming’s characters and so on, expressing your hope for help from Prof. Smith。

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Wang Hua” instead. Do not write the address。 Dear Prof. Smith,

I take great pleasure in introducing to you Mr. Li Ming, my classmate and best friend。

He is going to pursue his studies as a postgraduate in your university after his graduation here. We’ve lived and studied together for almost four years. No friend deserves so much love and respect as he does. His performance in the school years was outstanding. In addition, he has a very pleasant personality and staying with him is always pleasant。

Will you please give him some guidance regarding the postgraduate entrance examination? If it is convenient, could you introduce him to the future tutor? It would be appreciated of you can give him some help。 Yours truly, Wang Hua 常用句式：

1、Please allow me to introduce one of my best friends to you。 请允许我向您推荐我最好的朋友。

2、I am writing to introduce Li Ming, one of my college classmates in Beijing。 我写信是要介绍我在北京时的大学同学李明。

3、I am very glad to have this chance to write to you to ? 很高兴能有这次机会向您写信??

4、I take pleasure in introducing to you the bearer Mr. Li。 很高兴能向您介绍这封信的持有者李先生。

5、The bearer of this letter is Mr. Li whom I personally know to be a most deserving person for your position。

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这里介绍的这封信的持有者李先生，我个人认为是这个职位的最佳人选。 6、Thanks for your attention and hope to receive your reply。 多谢您的关注，希望能收到您的回复。

7、It would be appreciated of you can give her some help。 如果您能给他提供帮助，我将不胜感激。

8、I would be most grateful of you could lend due attention to this letter and contact me at?

如您能对此信给予一定的关注并通过??和我联系，我将非常感谢。

9、In addition, I want to express my sincere thanks for your attention。 另外，真诚地感谢您的关注。

书信类小作文模板分析

英语(二)最新大纲规定小作文，要求考生根据所给情景写出约100词(标点符号不计算在内)的应用性短文，包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、报告等。以下针对考研英语信函做出总结。信函从类别上分类包括以下几种类型：建议信、投诉信、求职信、辞职信、感谢信、道歉信、表扬信、询问信等。从信函对象来分的话，包括私人信函和公务信函。 一、英文书信格式

缩进式：称呼顶格写，正文每段第一行向后缩进4个字母，段与段之间不空行，落款位于中间偏右的位置。

齐头式：称呼、正文和落款均顶格写。正文中，段与段之间空一行。 建议大家采用缩进式格式。 ★称呼

书信写作的称呼语大致分为两种情况： 书信的情况 称呼语

1)写给团体、组织或机构的负责人 ①给不认识的人

Dear Sir or Madam,/ To Whom It Many Concern

②给认识的人

性别+姓：Dear Mr. Wang

性别+职务：Dear Mr./Ms. President/Professor/Manager 职务+姓名：Dear President (James) Wang 2)写给个人

①认识，但关系不太亲密同1）中的②

②熟人或亲属直呼其名：Dear Mary, Dear John

注：president的含义：总统、董事长、总裁、大学校长、会长、主席等。

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★正文

考研应用文一般有三点提纲，即三个内容要点。因此，考生应严格按照大纲要求写成三句，每句表达一个提纲要点，顺序不要打乱，做到文字条理清晰，简明准确。书信作文一般7~8句，使用3~5个关联词，3~5个从句，首尾两段可套用一些固定句型。

★落款

a) 落款包括结束语和署名两部分。

b) 结束语是表示礼节的套语，写在正文下面两三行处的右侧，从中间写起，第一个词的开头字母要大写，末尾用逗号。一般为“Yours sincerely/truly,”，根据考研大纲，署名一致为Li Ming，注意不能写自己的真实姓名。另外，考研书信类不要求写日期。

考研英语(二)小作文范文点评

1.Directions:

Some international students are coming to your university. Write then an e-mail in the name of the Students' Union to

1) extend your welcome, and

2) provide some suggestions for their campus life here. You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming”instead. Do not write the address. (10 Points) 参考范文

Dear friends，

I am very glad to hear that you would come to our school. Firstly I will extend to you our warmest welcome as you are coming to our university.

Before you come here, I will try to make some useful suggestions for you. First of all, it is better to learn Chinese well as soon as possible. Perhaps it’s not easy to master a language in a short time, but it is very important in your daily life. Secondly, it is necessary to know some cultural differences between two countries. Otherwise, you will meet some unnecessary troubles.

At last, you should get to know the weather and prepare for the clothes in each season. We are looking forward to seeing you soon and wish everything goes well. Sincerely yours, Li Ming 内容结构

首段开门见山表达了自己对对方的欢迎之情，明确表达了文章的主要意思和目的;接着根据题目要求，给对方提供了有关学校生活的建议。信的正文简明扼要，条理清楚。以First of all、Secondly、At last标明顺序，以使文章层次清分明、脉络合理。(首先，尽快学好汉语，或许在很短的时间内掌握一门语言很困难，但在你的日常生活中会很有作用。其次，要了解两个国家之间的文化差异，否则你会遇到一些不必要的麻烦。最后，了解天气情况，准备好每个季节要穿得衣服。)

最后，结尾部分既没有过分使用华丽辞藻，更没有粗鲁无礼，而是恰当好处地表达期待之情，祝福对方一切顺利。整个作文思路清晰，目标明确，语气恰当。既注重了语言的正式和礼貌，遵循了书信的交际原则，而且把握了细节，提供了合情合理的建议。

二、语言表达

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应用文的实际用途决定了其语言应该简洁明了，不求复杂多变或者辞藻华丽。用词准确是本范文取得高分的关键之一。如extend to you our warmest welcome(我们向你表示最热烈的欢迎);make some useful suggestions(提出几条有用的建议);in a short time(在很短的时间内);wish everything goes well(希望一切顺利);meet some unnecessary troubles(遇到一些不必要的麻烦)。其次是文章中的语法用得十分准确，几乎没有什么错误。 I am very glad to hear that 中that引导了一个宾语从句。注意不要混淆It is better to do sth.和You’d better do sth.这两个不同的句式结构。此外，文中多次出现了It is+形容词+to do不定式的结构，该句型相对简单，语言通俗易懂。

以上是从内容结构和语言表达两个方面对此篇范文进行了点评。希望同学们以此为鉴，能够写出更高质量的英语作文。

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