2013届高考英语专线突破（书面表达短文改错高效仿真模拟--巅峰训

2013届高考英语专线突破（书面表达巅峰训练）

1，第四部分：写作（共两节，满分40分）

第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

Mrs. Williams, my next-door neighbor, have a big house with a beautiful garden in front of them. She is very proud of her house because of it is always clean and tidy. While cleaned the carpets one day she suddenly saw a little mice run across her dining room. She felt terrible ashamed, for she used to telling others that mice were found only in dirty houses. She quickly asked her daughter Jenny help catch the mouse. It takes them almost half an hour to catch the mouse. Afraid of being laughed at by other people around her, Mrs. Williams wanted her daughter to keep it the secret.

第二节 书面表达（满分25分）

最近， 校车的安全引起了社会的关注。 政府在征集校车安全的条例，请你用英语写一篇短文，提出合理建议并向《英语周报》投稿。要点如下：

1． 严期格限制乘坐人数； 2． 定期进行安全教育； 3． 设置专门停靠站点； 4． 严格挑选合格司机。

5． 注意，词数：100左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 改错：1.have—has 2.them—it 3.of去掉 4.cleaned—cleaning

5. mice—mouse 6.terrible—terribly 7.telling—tell 8.加to 9.takes—took 10.the—a 书面表达：

2，第二节 短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）

Dear Tom,

I’m very glad to learn from your e-mail that you and your sister will come to

Xi’an and call on me on July. 1st. And I’m terribly sorry that I can’t meet you at

the airport because I have to attend meeting in Beijing. Now let me to tell you the

way to your home. When you got out of the airport, you can take Bus No.29 to

YouYi Bus Station. Walk across the Friendship Street to the west, you can see a

bookstore at the corner. Turn to the left there and go straightly on. Then you can

see a bank your left. The apartment building I live in is next to the bank. Find

Room 502, which my mother will be waiting for you . Best regard to you all.

Yours,

Liu Mei 第三节 书面表达（满分30分）

假定你是中学生李华, 在搜狐微博上看到一位名叫Worryguy的中学生发布的博文。请你根据博文内容、写作要点和要求发布自己的观点。

首 页 微博 博客 册 客 相播我来说两句 微博通知 我的评论 我的邮箱 Worryguy: A parents’meeting is always meaning a complaints they come back from it. Now the mid-term exam is over and another terrible parents’meeting is around corner. What shall I do? Help! 表情 @ 点名 图片 视频 meeting to a slow student. My parents will scold me whenever 写作要点：

发布 1. 表明自己的看法； 2. 陈述自己的理由（可举例说明）； 3. 提出至少两条建议。 要求：

1. 短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。 2. 短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。 3. 内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。 4. 书写需清晰、工整。

Dear Worryguy,

This is really a tough problem to deal with. In my opinion,_________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________

Yours, LiHua 短文改错：

And—But meeting 前加a 去掉to your---my got---get Walk---Walking straightly—straight bank后加on which---where(in which) regard--regards 作文：

Dear Worryguy, This is really a tough problem to deal with. In my opinion, you should not be afraid of a parents’ meeting. Instead, you’d better take a proper attitude to it.

In fact, a parents’ meeting is for the most part a communication meeting, where teachers and parents exchange information and opinions about students’ situations at school and home, which is beneficial to improving teaching quality.

As for your problem, it’s advisable to have a good talk with your parents and teachers. While talking with your parents, you can focus on how hard you study (if it is the case) and why you failed this time or even ask them to help analyze your failure. When talking with your teachers, better ask them for the law of each subject and effective methods of learning them. Anyhow, improving your grades is the key to solving the problem.

Yours,

Li Hua

3，第二节 短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线 （﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Never should I forget the first English lesson giving by Miss Liu. On that day, when she entered the classroom, we found out that she was a young and beautiful lady. Then she introduced her and said we shouldn’t call her Teacher Liu but Miss. Liu. Late, she let us go to the blackboard and say something about ourselves in English on turn. When it was my turn, I felt so shy that I don’t dare to say anything before the class. She went up to me and said kind, “Don’t be afraid. I believe you can do well.” At last, I went to the blackboard. She praised me for that I had done.

第三节 书面表达（满分30分）

近年来尽管政府在改善居住上花了大量资金，但是住房问题仍然是中国许多大城市所面临的最严重问题之一。对此话题你班举行了热烈的讨论。一部分人建议：多造高层建筑(high-rise apartments)，一部分人认为：向地下发展。而你赞成前一种观点。 你的理由： 1.建筑费用便宜；

2.久住地下对身体不利；

3.地上阳光充足，地下只有人造光源

你的结论：…… 提示：人造光源（artificial lighting）

现请你以How to Solve the Housing Problem in Big Cities为题写120字以上的短文。

,Never should I forget the first English lesson giving by Miss Liu. On that

shall given

day, when she entered the classroom, we found out that she was a young and beautiful lady. Then she introduced her and said we shouldn't call her Teacher

herself

Liu but Miss. Liu. Late, she let us go to the blackboard and say something about

Later

ourselves in English on turn. When it was my turn, I felt so shy that I don't dare

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