2011年成人高考专升本-英语作文写作要点分析(2)

The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious．Therefore，we must take some effective

measures to solve it.

6．表示变化

1）Some changes have taken place in the past five years．

2）A great change will certainly be produced in the world’s communications．

3）The computer has brought about many changes in education．

例如：

Some changes have taken place in people’s diet in the past five years．The major reasons for these changes are not far to

seek．Nowadays，more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein，and from fruit and vegetable to milk

for vitamins．

7．表示事实、现状

1）We cannot ignore the fact that．．．

2）No one can deny the fact that．．．

3）There is no denying the fact that．．．

4）This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in．

5）However，that’s not the case．

例如：

We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollution．To solve these problems， we

can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution．The government on its part should also design stricter

laws to promote a cleaner environment．

8．表示比较

1）Compared with A，B．．．

2）I prefer to read rather than watch TV．

3）There is a striking contrast between them． 例如：

Compared with cars，bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable．Firstly，they do not consume natural

resources of petroleum．Secondly，they do not cause the pollution problem．Last but not least，they contribute to people’

s health by giving them due physical exercise．

9．表示数量

1）It has increased（decreased）from．．．to．．．

2）The population in this city has now increased （decreased）to 800，000．

3）The output of July in this factory increased by 15％ compared with that of January．

例如：

With the improvement of the living standard，the proportion of people’s income spent on food has decreased while that

spent on education has increased．

再如：

From the graph listed above，it can be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two

hours per week in 2008 to 20 hours in 2009.

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Practical Writing Samples 英语应用文写作范文

1. A Letter of Apology 道歉信

由于未能及时赴约，给老师写一封道歉信，解释原因请求原谅同时提出希望下一次约会。 You have made an appointment with your teacher, but failed to keep it. Write a letter to your teacher to

1) Apologize for your failure to keep the appointment, 2) Explain your reason to your teacher, and

3) Express your wish to make another appointment.

Dear Prof. Wang,

I’m writing to ask you to excuse me for not being able to keep our appointment. I do know that this is very impolite

and must have caused you much trouble.

I do reckon that at present any explanation is pale and futile. However I do not want you to misunderstand me. On my

way to your office, an old lady suddenly fainted due to heart attack on the bus. I stopped a taxi and sent her into a

nearby hospital. I stayed there until her son came, which spoiled our appointment.

I am aware that our appointment is of importance. I do hope that you would be kind enough to spare your valuable to

meet me.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely Yours Li Ming 2. A Letter of Thanks 感谢信

生病住院两周，老师和同学过来看望你，为此你给他们写一封感谢信，表达你的感激之情。 You have been ill and hospitalized for two weeks. Your teachers and classmates went to see you. Write a letter to them to

1) Thank them for their coming to see you, 2) Describe your feeling, and 3) State your present condition.

Dear Teachers and Classmates,

First of all, please allow me to say “Thank you” to all of you. It is very kind of you to spare your valuable time

during the period of final examinations and come to see me.

Your visit has given me much confidence and power to overcome the illness. When I first came to the hospital, I really

felt lonely and did not have enough courage and confidence to overcome the illness. Your visit has

made me feel that I am

not poor and lonely in the world and in fact I am living in a world of love, which has brought me much confidence and

power to overcome the illness.

These days, my condition has been obviously improved due to the careful treatment offered by doctors and nurses.

Doctors have told me that I will completely recover from illness in two weeks. I hope that I can see you earlier.

Again, special thanks go to all of you.

Sincerely Yours Li Ming 3. A Letter of Invitation邀请信

春节即将来临，你写信邀请外国朋友来中国过春节。

The Spring Festival is coming shortly. You intend to invite your foreign friend to come to China and spend the traditional

Chinese Festival together. Write a letter to him/her to 1) Express your warm invitation to him/her, 2) Introduce the Spring Festival, and

3) Mention the places you will accompany him/her to visit.

Dear Beckham,

First of all, please allow me to express my heartfelt invitation to you. Since the Spring Festival is coming shortly, I

sincerely invite you to come to China and spend the holiday with me.

Spring Festival is of much importance to Chinese people. It has a long history and Chinese have attached much importance

to the holiday. To be exact, the Spring Festival has been the most significant holiday. The Spring Festival is to Chinese

what Christmas is to the Westerners.

If you come, I am going to accompany you to fairgrounds (庙会), where you can have a close look at some of the Chinese

traditions.

I am looking forward to your reply. Sincerely Yours

Li Min 4．A Letter of Suggestion 建议信

给北京市市长王岐山写信，希望自己能成为2008年奥运会的志愿者，同时提出自己的看法。 You have watched the 2004 Athens Olympic Games and are interested in becoming a volunteer for 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.

Write a latter to Wang Qishan, mayor of the capital city, to 1) Make suggestions for the 2008 preparation work, 2) Express your wish to be a volunteer.

Dear Wang Qishan,

I am a senior in Peking University. The 2008 Beijing Olympic Games is coming in two years. After watching the 2004

Athens Olympic Games, I can not help writing to you.

First of all, here is my suggestion for the preparation work of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games. The construction work

of the sports building must be completed in time according to the contract. In Athens, the swimming stadium was not

accomplished in time so that the event had to be held in the open air, which has brought negative effect on the

performance of athletes. In one word, to protect the international image of China and ensure the Olympic competition, we

must finish our preparation work well and in time.

Last but not least important, I want to express my wish to be a volunteer. In the first place, it is the duty of every

Chinese to do his bit for the 2008 Olympic Games. In the second place, I have a good command of foreign languages. I can

speak English, Russian, and Japanese. Therefore I can be a qualified volunteer. I am looking forward to your reply

Sincerely Yours

Li Ming

5．A Letter of Complaint投诉信

你新买的电脑出了问题，为此你写信给经理投诉。

You have bought a brand-new computer in a store. But much to your disappointment, it could not be properly operated when

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